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SM : [110] I Am The Baddes One!

🕑 Added 2024-05-24 16:00:22 +0000 UTC

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Duck

If there’s one critique I can give, it’s the needless repetition of certain information. When you establish a rule or concept in your story and explain it, there’s no need to repeat the explanation every time it’s mentioned. Like Ritsuka’s role as a master. It’s really not necessary and gets pretty tiresome after the 43rd time of reading ‘Alvin is the beast of Preservation, he rejects human order naturally!’

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