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Sally Page 33
🕑 Added 2020-09-29 00:45:10 +0000 UTCI spent most of my time on the dialogue on this page.
I hope you guys like the energy I tried to put in this page. Not everyone thinks about this stuff, but simply moving a character from one place to another takes planning and stuff, this page I'm pretty happy with, and I'd like some feedback if you guys don't mind, mostly about if you guys feel its easy to follow or not.
Thanks everyone!
Comments
Sleepnir
hahaha, this is great! You managed to really exhibit that rapid, cartoonish, kinetic sense of movement in just a few panels of one comic page, amazing! Plus you even included some quite sexy angles and poses for Sally too! Very impressive all around--and yes, easy to follow, although Sonic being so confused and uncomfortable is especially fitting considering how wham-bam it all was
Kyria
Really looking forward to Sally breeding herself on that thing. Also hoping Sonic gets some revenge at the end with that ass of hers. Keep up the great work!
Ronfrax
It did take me until finishing the page to work out exactly what she was wrapping him with, but the action itself is fine. It's a complicated and ambitious sequence, imo.
Shintoshi
I'd say the series of events is quite easy to follow, with her tossing him onto the table and strapping him in for what's to come. Love her expression in panel one and her pose in the last panel.
