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Dev Update 9/26/22

🕑 Added 2022-09-26 18:46:40 +0000 UTC
Dev Update 9/26/22
Dev Update 9/26/22
Dev Update 9/26/22
Dev Update 9/26/22
Dev Update 9/26/22
Dev Update 9/26/22
Dev Update 9/26/22

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Razorhead

Ah, that's perfectly fine! As I mentioned narrative is important, and that's one thing you do well! Will be looking forward to Chapter 5 then, and enjoy the Brittani content in the next one!

Thanks so much! Happy to have you here, and I’m glad you’re enjoying the game! Chapter Four won’t have too much erotic content with Gabby, unfortunately. What it *will* do is advance both Madison and Gabby’s stories, bringing them further under the player’s influence, and setting up some content in Chapter Five that I think you’ll enjoy. 😁 Thanks again for your support!

Razorhead

Hey there, am a new patron who joined this month! Just want to say I'm really impressed with the game so far. Especially concerning the more darker routes. While there are a lot of developers who can write romantic, humorous, corruption, and cuckolding stories well, I find that writers who can write darker content well are far and few between. Usually they just focus on the sex scenes, and the narrative and dialogue is an afterthought. With that in mind I have to say that I really enjoy your writing in that regards, especially on the point of having the characters react realistically and believable. I know that Nicki's new look in Chapter 2 & 3 has gotten some criticism here and there, but I just want to say that it feels like a natural state for her character to go after what she's been through, so it fits. Anyway as a massive Gabby fan, and a fan of darker content, I'm hoping that some darker content with her is soon to come! This chapter focussed on the corruption route, which I might say was quite well done, and of course with this many characters and different routes it's natural not every route can be advanced each update, but I'm still eagerly awaiting it! Kind regards, and keep up the good work!

Bob Obo

I mean all relationships are transactional to a certain extent

Well, part of it is that I want to show Nicki was still into him even when he was a little heavier and poor. Things may not fully spill over into romance until that pivotal night, but the feelings have been simmering for a while. I do see how it could come of as superficial, though. Hm! Something to think about for sure!

Dandelion

mmmm I'm not sure making MC hefty would work the best for the Nikki/MC romance path. Having MC go from ugly/poor -> handsomish/rich makes their romance seem more transactional/superficial. As it stands right now if MC is mostly good then Nikki coming to realize she has feelings for MC is more about her own personal journey/transformation than anything to do with the MC. He is the same guy as before the wealth just makes his generous personality more apparent. But if MC makes so much transformation it makes it seem like he had to change drastically for Nikki to fall for him which doesn't sit as well. That's just me though haha. Maybe have him be pudgy or skinny-fat but I wouldn't make him ugly and fat.


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