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Arc 8 Chapter CXLIV: The Start Of Something Great

🕑 Added 2025-06-11 20:41:21 +0000 UTC

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Rastislav

Happy you enjoyed it my guy, and yeah I get where you are coming from, the romance was a bit rushed on purpose since that made the most sense but that doesn't mean something can't be built on those foundations. Guess you will have to wait and see once again :P

WannaBeATree

Good thing I stacked all the chapters past MCs arriving in Solstheim untill the end. It means I could read all of them back to back. I am a bit miffed that their marriage probably won't last that long, if it keeps going like that. They don't seem to be good for each other and very very bad at talking things out. I have high praise for the chapter where they flatlined Mora and it was mentioned that Minthara picked Reyvin out of convenience. Also the chapter that mentioned the grooming bit. In terms of litrpg and power fantasy, I am very content though. A few chapters around Solstheim were a bit too 'mundane', but the fact I could read it in one go, made up for a lot. I'd say the story is realy good for what it tries to be and can be both bindge-read and re-read. :) I'd personally wish for more conflicts that can't be solved by harming something/someone, but the story was never about that, which is why I can absolut respect the solution of 'shoving it to future me' or 'changing topic'. Acknowledging the existence of the problem, but refusing to engage with it, since the story is about something else. Clean, simple. :)

Angelwine

Amazing work author, I'll be there for the next adventure :)


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