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Temptation 10 - Coming Clean

🕑 Added 2019-12-02 01:01:31 +0000 UTC

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SokeriKielo

Of course I'm sticking with you! You're easily one of my favorite writers in the fandom. Oh no, now I'm worried - but also really excited! Can't wait to see what comes next.

Rain Storm

Thank you for the continued feedback, I really appreciate it! And yea, in hindsight i do kind of wish I'd gone into a bit more detail on that. This whole project so far has been a huge learning experience for me with pacing and chapter-driven stories. Thanks for sticking with me! And stay tuned. things are going to start getting bumpier. :3

SokeriKielo

Another fun chapter! I do wish you would've gone a bit more in detail about Sandra coming clean to Chase. Her avoiding telling him was a consistent thing in her previous chapters, so it feels a bit weird that it just ended up being resolved in a few paragraphs and without much fanfare in this one. And gosh, I'm even more worried for Sandra now than last time. 'I really was a lucky girl.' That sentence is so ominous! Be kind to her Dragonien, she's been through enough already.


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