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You Never Said You Were a...

🕑 Added 2021-04-19 21:59:55 +0000 UTC
You Never Said You Were a...

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Piedunk

Honestly, I think you do just fine with your words. I've never noticed you blathering or wasting words. You do exceptionally well with setting the scene and making the size difference really carry over from text to imagination. Of course, that's not to discredit your efforts in minimizing! You did a superb job with making just a little description go a long way!

Rain Storm

You'll get your turn, something tells me ;) But I'm really glad you liked it! Those little details are what I love so much about this type of thing. Sometimes a giant doesn't need to be smashing everything in sight and physically overpower you to be overwhelming. Sometimes just the simple Act of their phone being so large compared to you that it's vibrate function literally shakes the ground. Or that it's ringtone is as loud as the tornado siren. Or how the sheer mass of someone that size moving probably wouldn't even notice when one of their legs swept through of group of power lines and rip them out of the polls no more than you would notice if you walked through some spider webs And then like I was saying in the description I was actually really really happy with how this came out. The one thing I really pride myself on my writing is that I try to be really descriptive but I know sometimes that makes me blather on a lot and leads to a lot of wasted words that don't really add a lot to the description. So with this story I was specifically trying to minimize the word count while still trying to maintain the Vivid description and I think it turned out really well

Piedunk

Geez, you make sizeplay scenarios so believable. The noise, the sheer power of just someone walking or moving, or the intensity of their phone going off with a notification... What a wild ride. Glad I haven't been teased like this, I would probably combust on the spot, tbh.


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