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comic comm p.1 rough script
🕑 Added 2018-12-05 09:15:53 +0000 UTC this is the rough script for the first page of a comic commission I'm currently working on, I kept it pretty rough and didn't even erase a thing since I need the approval of the commissioner first before I'll clean this up, you can basically take this as a bit cleaner stick figures since I didn't double check anything xD My main goal was putting down a rough layout and plot, Anatomical correctness comes next c:
Comments
HuginnMuninn
It is indeed Night Rain! :3
I love Dash's sultry pose in the fifth panel and how her BF (that's Night Rain, isn't it?) is using his telekinesis to lift her goggles away at the very end.
ScarX_X
cool
