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89. Dinner With The King (1)

🕑 Added 2025-08-21 01:09:38 +0000 UTC

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MisterTubs

There is a soft rule in writing that basically states that a chapter should accomplish at least one of three things; progress in a character arc, progress in world building or establishing the setting, or progress in a plot/sub-plot. Although, some filler is unavoidable, it should be as sparse as possible. But yeah I think pacing might become a problem soon.

Undead Writer

TFTC!!

NeoUsui

Thank you so much, Author!

ZeroL

cannot lie little disappointed by the progression. we got in a car and got to the room where dinner is. one or two jabs between him and the body guards. feels like filler.


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