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🕑 Added 2023-06-25 16:56:25 +0000 UTC

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So what do you think of my suggestion for a sequel?

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I think a good way to end this fic is to have alex reach the absolute peak of this world try to reach further beyound fail then get reincarnated in the witcher universe a few days to multiple years after he met geralt and then with all his traits but instead of him growing wheb he gets traits his body Condenses his mucles bones etc also he take an incrediblely long time to grow like takeing 10-15 years to reach 6 meters tall maybe even twenty if he gets enough traits and his body gets even denser and he reaches full maturity when he reaches his previous size while also consuming monsters from the Witcher universe that give him more traits that have to do with magic etc. I think there could be a couple different reason Alex would try to break the demi god barrier 1 he knkws its a low chance if success and will help him not become a cruel monster due to the insanity inducing bordom he will endure during his multiple thousands of years he will be alive another is that he thinks if he can break the demigod door and become divine he can enter space and start finding even more monster traits to add to his collection and leaving behind the Monster Hunter planet once he starts seeing himself become cruel and a monster to be killed in the adventures perspective. A good start for the Witcher universe could be Alex being born in a forest instead of civilization to simbilize his self Identity as a monster and him growing for like a year or two in that forest before a nearby village puts a bounty on his head due to their Ignorance and geralt taking the bounty with alex recognizing him and then they catch up etc i dont know where to go from here as i don't know much about the witchers lore but i think it would be intresting. Also alex shoukd be re-reborn in a coastline forest being born in at a similar size mabye smaller mabye bigger i think it should be smaller though but with a lot more power in his limbs like at birth he should be half as strong as a jagras as a hatchling. But as i said Alex should be growing bigger at a much smaller rate 2 m at 10-20 years old i think this should geralt should find alex when he is 6 mounths to 3 years old and 5 to 10 years before geralt meets Ciri allowing alex to get good traits and become big enough to have a somewhat significant role in the story i don't remember where you estimated what time point geralt was from but I think I choose a good point in the time line also I think Alex's "species" if thats what we want to call it should be almost invisable in the dark when their young but once they reach young adult or teen they start delveloping white spots first under the wings then all over the body then when they reach full maturity there fully white to better blend in with the sky that is now there domain as his elder dragonness is adaptation it makes sense for his "species" to grow like that. Also alex shoukd eat a werewolf and gain either a more huminoid Physique similar to were wolfs allowing him to use tools and weapons with new his Dexteritis hands also he could gain magic and that could allow him to create illusions and do stuff similar to what the golden dragon did in the witcher tv show never really being human always a monster tho some could argue that humans are the worst monsters on the planet and i would tend to agree with them but not for this novel. Alex gaining magic would be a big game changer so alex should have to work for it as while it might be considered a rare "trait" in a select few, in the overall world population it a common ability making it so alex would have to eat a certain amount of "magic" in creatures prefurablely like 10 million (As a baseline a werewolf would have 100 magic in there system) because alex would already be so overly saturated with Monster hunter energy that runs through his body so effciently that the creation of mana vains at t1 he should also only get a notification about being able to get "magic vains" at a score of 10,000 magic. I also really do not want Alex's story to end with just and alex moved away from humans because reason a-c like the orginal fic write did like you should have alex finish the plot then spend the next year or two helping the new workd stabilise and during that time finish his sublimation then he should bring up his conerns about his life span with the admiral and ask about his opinion on it while tell him he decided to try to break the barrior to godhood.(or to become a true demigod as the peak elder dragons in the monster hunter world only have the tinyest smallest sliver of divinity so small it might as well be a tenth of the size of a cell alex having his system and his sentience would allow him to see/feel the sliver and he would leave it alone for a Month or two before his body would start to feel irritated all the time and in a state of stress as Alex reached the peak of the world and the world itself wasn't letting him follow his nature of adapting to new things since doing that would push him past the peak of the world becoming a true immortalas his soul would become part energy fusing with his tiny sliver of divinity allowing Alex to keep his body and soul alive for forever unless he were to jump into a black hole which even light cannot escape. Alex with the help of his system would come to understand that to push past the world's limits he would need to preform a ritual that first bound all the energy in his body in a continous cycle for about a month never going below 50% of his total energy but a low bound to his soul then during the process of fusing the Is extraordinary amount of energy bound to his soul around 300% with another 150 percent going to his system so that it evolves with him to support "goddlyhood traits" also during thw two year arc helping the adventurers and everyone stabilize the new world alex's system should become semi-selfaware. Now during the fusing ritual the world would Intervene stopping alex from Completing the rutual causing all the energy he collected and the energy in his body to start unstavlizing and going wild in his body while the world starts to kill him but Alex's system now being semi-selfaware doesn't wan't its host to die so it sacrifices it semi-selfawareness and all the energy collected for it along with some codeing from its AI being Disintegrated but it should only really effect his insane growth spurts that happened everytime he got specific traits (the AI that comes after should compensate this by instead making his bones muscles even his brain and heart get denser in the case of his brain it would also increase the eletrical impulse speed by ×2) so his semi-selfaware system would realise even with all the energy that had been collected it still didnt have enough energy to save him and if jt were to turn His Physical Body into Energy it still wouldn't have enough so it would look at the Possibilities of what could save alex and its conclusion... death no but really it would kill alex while using all the energy that had been collected also all the energy it would gain by turning Alex's body into pure energy killing his body temporarily and sending his soul to the only other dimension/universe it has corrdinates for the witcher universe then it would send itself and alex to the witcher universe with alex in a tiny pure black egg harder to break then punching a 3 meter steel wall to make sure that alex wouldn't be killed in his egg then scene you leave us on a massive cliff hangar wondering weather alex survived the reincarnation to the witcher universe keeping us in suspence while maje like the first 5 or so cgapters of it and post them in a new book also make sure to post the new book title in the old book so people can find it. For a title I was thinking you could do something like Custom Made Monster System: Strongest monster: Witcher

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Thx for the chapter


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