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(BUS)Chapter 75: BOOM, Headshot

🕑 Added 2025-03-18 15:02:12 +0000 UTC

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Christian Jeffress

Absolutely, awesome sniper rifle, thanks for another entertaining chapter.

Loskro

I'm trying to fully flesh things out rather than going from one battle to another. Storytelling woes to be honest. If it was a video game where you could actually see what was happening and why the story would go WAY faster but because I have to describe everything it takes much longer and can even get boring at parts. Can't do much to change that without seeming like I was rushing past important stuff to focus on action.

Man of the lobsters

Yeah a little bit i could pick up some speed. But dont take that as rush it, its just been a while since we have seen some action and other character interaction with Alex

Loskro

Do you mean the story progression is too slow?

malle

thanks for the chapter. But please increase the speed of the story development a bit or write a bit more.


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