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Billy #1 & 2 feedback

🕑 Added 2021-02-19 13:34:29 +0000 UTC

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Nick563

You're right. I've added some more lines to the ending paragraph. Should be better now! :D

Lyme24

I thought the description of the final conquest of the teacher was a little lacking. Also, I thought it could have been a bit rougher and less merciful, like your other stories, his extremely large cock should give her quite a bit of pain, but of course she still loves it and begs for it because the extreme organs make up for it.

Nick563

Most likely he'll have a rival or some punk who thinks he's the real alpha

I. Nobes

Nothing like total stud loving. But maybe competition? That may ge difficult for you to write but hey, an idea


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