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A loving wife upgrade - part 1

🕑 Added 2021-07-04 06:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Lyme24

Hi Nick. Welcome Back! Of course I've got a couple of thoughts First. I really like this story. To improve it I would have put his dimensions after his initial growth in the beginning and then say Hannah couldn't handle his body size or cock size after he grew, and that she was very disappointed. That accounts her initial obsession with sucking his cock. Also, I know you like to go for unrealistically huge, but maybe at first Hannah should only have grown to seven foot whatever and 600 or 700 pounds. Otherwise she would have killed him during the sex and it leaves room for more stages of growth. As she grows he could grow, even if at a slower pace. I love the concept that she is so obsessed with sex that she can only speak in simple statements. For the next installment, instead of saying they fucked for hours like you did in the Super soldier story (it's much better in this story), a few more short descriptions of the sex actions during the time, and giver her more short statement utter would be great. Thanks for the great work

Nick563

No futa in this one, but wait for the second story of this month, you won't be disappointed ;)

Square

Was hoping she’d grow a bigger cock than him - love your futa work

Nick563

The second one should be coming out next month, but I've still got to think about some of the details. I didn't think about babies before, but now that you mention it it sounds like a pretty fun idea to include :D

I. Nobes

This needs a sequel. Fast. Maybe a baby comes out of em that is massive in every way! Maybe twins of different genders?

steve scibelli

Glad you're back!


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