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The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.7

🕑 Added 2023-07-29 03:10:10 +0000 UTC
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.7
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.7
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.7
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.7
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.7

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Pope Yoda I

The after action sleepover scene needs more human element. The girls just went through a traumatic event, so I'm genuinely surprised their friend Ginny isn't in the scene/included in the makeshift sleepover. Don't only focus on big-name characters. Being able to add necessary characters to such scenes and balance them so that they can all contribute is the line that separates good authors from great ones. Add Ginny to the friend group. She doesn't need to be a harem character.


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