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The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.11

🕑 Added 2023-08-05 23:43:18 +0000 UTC

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dryskies_btb

Maybe. I do still want a villain for most of the story. Like, obviously Voldemort is the overall villain but I need one for the MC to clash with until he returns (and is subsequently killed immediately again). On the other hand, killing off Lucius opens up avenues to change the political sphere of Britain and has actual consequences for Fudge. And I think I like the idea of having Fudge as the more low-key villain instead of Lucius. Lucius is obviously dangerous, Fudge is more unexpected. But he still holds a lot of power in the Wizarding World and a cornered animal is dangerous. Especially if he finds out Atlas was the one to kill his Malfoy sugar daddy.

Pope Yoda I

Good chapter, though I think killing off Lucius this early is a mistake. It's a villain plotline that could add greatly to the story if used correctly, instead of just offing him off screen. Why not have MC, say, blow his head off in the graveyard at the end of Year 4? Or after Lucius confronts him with some buddies after MC fucks his wife?

Alorim

Ah. Widowing the MILF. Classic.


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