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The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.17 (old)

🕑 Added 2023-08-19 02:18:44 +0000 UTC

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DataMonarch

Wasn’t really feeling this chapter, the last 2 chapters have felt more like the Heather and Hermione show featuring Atlas. Which makes sense considering the circumstances and this arcs direction. I just want to spend more time in the MCs mind and seeing the world and its events as he is seeing them. There hasn’t been many times where we say in Atlas’s POV for the entire duration of the chapter, and I feel like we the readers want to spend more time with him.

dryskies_btb

Already working on it but thanks for the feedback. I'll still probably keep this chapter up as an archive but it's definitely not going to be the final version.

T5p6

I know it’s technically a AU, however going from trading spell battle to punch a dragon is too much,nerf the runes ,and preferably discard the dragon blessing part,heather already overpowered and its feel like cheap powerup


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