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The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.19

🕑 Added 2023-08-28 20:33:56 +0000 UTC
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.19
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.19
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.19
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.19
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch.19

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placid

So uh... am I the only one that can't stand tsun characters that stay tsun? It might add some comedic effect for the plot or something, but everytime she shows her actions it just makes me despise her character more. Even if Atlas is having fun with it, why hasn't he forced her to sit down and listen to the actual events and then ask her if he should have left her sister to be possibly raped and murdered by the trash? She's delusional, and he isn't really helping matters, just playing with her.

DaoOfAnime

Bro ur comment is legendary

Victor Weismann

I mean is hard wait 5 or 7 days when you are in drugs, sigh. I wanted the history continue!!! Ugh

Lictor Magnus

This chapter was just posted 😂. Let them come as they come. The author hasn’t committed to any kind of release schedule.

Victor Weismann

when you will posted next chapter, i mean chapter 20, not some 6.5 chapter?

Victor Weismann

Yeah, to me it seemed like he understood something, but didn't want to confirm anything just because of the 'plot' so the author can do more chapter before the 'big reveal'. Knowing Sirus, he would completely dump the beans on the MC the moment he met him, especially if he 'thought' he had little time to live.

dryskies_btb

I can add a line about him noticing something (I think I will) but the real reveal will be next chapter. Edit: Added a quick bit of Atlas noticing and suspecting something. It doesn't really change anything about the chapter other than that. Again, the real Bella reveal will be next chapter.

Dex

The whole over looking the cat stunt is just too forced like he did not see Sirius just staring at the cat. You have made this MC braindead and not very observant which can lead to doom in HP.

Pope Yoda I

I suspect it's just due to the stress of the scene. I also wouldn't be the most observant/insightful if I just met my dad for the first time, after he broke out of prison, after he snuck into the bedroom I'm sharing with another woman, while a cop has her wand trained on us both. * taps chin * And while coming to terms with the fact that I'm definitely going to bang at least one of my relatives. More seriously, he do got a point. While the cat being in the scene adds a certain comedic whimsy, it may be too much. Perhaps just have her only visible to Sirius/hiding in the shadows instead?

Pope Yoda I

That was the best chase scene I've ever read. Very, very well done. I like your tag-teaming between Parvati and Lavender. Feel more like living, breathing characters than many. Greatly enjoyed Fleur's scene. --- Sirius glances around the room, looking as though he were certain to find something that wasn't there. "What are you doing?" "You're a Black. As such, I kind of expected more..." he waives his hand vaguely, "crude instrument for your liaison here." Heather gags, "TMI! TMI!" Sirius shrugs, "It's true, though. Whips and chains ARE our vanilla. Hell, I learned how to use a whip BEFORE I learned how to use a wand, and I'm considered a disappointment by my family." "...maybe being raised by muggles made me turn normal? All offense meant, of course." "Of course." Meanwhile, Tonks looks like she's been hit by a world-shaking revelation, her skin ashy white and hands shaking. "My mom told me those were just family heirlooms." "They technically are," Sirius nods, "your great-great-great grandmother used to own the set Andromeda has. I think they were once used on a king, even." "Why is this the first I'm hearing about this?! I used to sneak out and play with them!" "One of us! One of us!" "Shut up! I thought those were toys!" "Look inside yourself and know this to be true," Sirius proclaims, as though announcing a command from Magic itself, "above what anyone might say about your parents, your blood knows that you ARE a true-born Black." While she was having her mental breakdown exacerbated, Septima leans in and whispers, "I don't think I'd go for whips and chains, but I don't think I'd mind a bit of spanking." P.S. Fleur may need a closer view of Black family heirlooms. Perhaps the fuzzy handcuffs?

IEU097

Come on. How could he not figure out Bella is an Animagus? He just saw an Animagus transform. Bella might as well have a neon sign on her head saying she's one.


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