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The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch. 23

🕑 Added 2023-09-08 23:52:15 +0000 UTC
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch. 23
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch. 23
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch. 23
The Grind (And Helping Heather Potter) Ch. 23

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DaoOfAnime

I like the first pic best, Aurora 1

Mark Randle

Thanks for the chapter. Really loving this story so far. Excited for more.

JO LP

Press the Shift key together with the Return key.

Pope Yoda I

Not sure how I'd do it on a PC. I'm on the cellphone Patreon app and use the equivalent of the Return key. Oddly, that does NOT work if typed directly into the website 🧐.

dryskies_btb

Side note: How do you do paragraphs in Patreon comments? I'm on desktop and the return key just posts the comment. Tab doesn't work either.

dryskies_btb

I feel like Fudge (at least this one) is scary (scary probably isn't the right word but you get what I mean) as a villain because he's not competent. He's just so overwhelmingly greedy that it transcends competence. There's something to be said for a villain with more power than they should reasonably have who's just throwing it around to get what they want/because they're backed into a corner. This is the major corner-backing for Fudge/Umbridge. They aren't through yet, just suitably warned for now. With the entire Ministry at his beck and call, along with the backing of Lucius' replacement within the Dark Faction, Fudge doesn't have to be competent. He just has to keep throwing shit at the wall (Atlas) until it sticks. This first attempt failed because he waited to publicly humiliate Atlas and use him as a scapegoat. If he goes a less public route, his greed/systemic power can really come out to shine.

James (Silencian)

I think the justification for the combat/killing also contributes to the right of Conquest thing. Else anyone could go on murder spree and try for house domination. This was in defense of another against malicious entities but thats just my interpretation for why Voldemort wouldn't have magic provide him the many houses he's murdered through Conquest.

Pope Yoda I

Not a bad chapter. Don't forget that it isn't a crime to make competent villains, even if they aren't planned to live for very long (though I do like the Moody plotline quite a bit). Consider toning down on the Right of Conquest thing, as the kills were via ambush? Otherwise Voldemort is the head of, like, 80 families. I feel like that would be something that could only take place in a duel between two heads of similar status (ie equivalent stakes). Don't forget that Fudge wasn't minister when Sirius was first jailed (more enemies to the list! Yay!), though he is still the asshole that tried to murder him.


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