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KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10

🕑 Added 2024-12-21 17:57:25 +0000 UTC
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10
KYBER-PUNK 22BBY Ch.10

Comments

MrX

For me I prefer the author do everything. I don't mind the author asking questions and bouncing off different ideas with people in chat though., because it might trigger something in the authors brain for a future thing in the same story or a new one.

dryskies_btb

I kinda see where you're coming from, but we really didn't see enough of him in canon to know for sure that he's loyal. For all we know and see, he could've been planning a betrayal for the day after his suicide by cyberpsycho. That said, I'm hoping Pilar will feel more in character/more fleshed out after this next chapter. Give me/him a chance to reveal motivations, grudges, and whatnot.

Austin

Love this story

Xazo

Thanks for the chapter.

GoT779

I know this fanfiction but this feels out of Charcter for Pillar

Dan W

The force was too horny to warn him.

CkLance

I've said it before, but please, PLEASE, write what you're inspired to write. Forcing yourself to write something you don't feel like writing will just make you hate it and make reading it unbearable. Just follow your muse and create what you want to create.

Dan W

Thank you so much for using my upgrade suggestion. My goldfish brain is already starting to get characters and appearances mixed up.

Kasikan

He wasn't an ally though. At least if he'd have killed him before they made their plans, back when he first showed up and acted like he was going to be in charge. That'd have been the perfect time to kill him. Make a point of the only good Hutt is a dead one. At this point, it's just odd that they didn't kill him off sooner. It's a Hutt. It always deserves death.

Gamesempie

Write what you want to write. If you feel a groove going with this go for it. If you're feeling it for something else write to your hearts content. If you're uncertain ask us what we would like you to focus on next and we will point you towards the story that we have the most hype for. Don't ever feel like you "have" to write something.

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, I should have expected Pilar to pull something like this, but I really didn't for some reason. Regardless, I look forward to the retaliation. In regards to stories, I say go for whatever feels best for you. I have been greatly enjoying this story, but I am also a huge fan of Dead End. I look forward to what you come up with next, stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

dryskies_btb

It really, really won't. I'm not going to drag it out for no good reason. Maybe a bit more than half of next chapter, just to establish some things and exposite some others. But I still need to finish Becca's smut next chapter so the betrayal/action part definitely won't drag out.

dryskies_btb

They originally kept Ave around for legitimacy but he quickly overstayed his welcome. Even still, it's a bad look to go around killing the allies who helped put you in power (Ave didn't do ANYTHING of real note but it's the principle of the thing). And that's just for Linth/Shank/Coyate/Suunri/Sstala/Shaitan/De'vi's sake. The other vassals in the cartel would just see their new crime lord killing their peers (and another Hutt to boot) with no provocation. Atom kind of needed Ave to act to actually take care of him.

Ozzy117

Uh, does Atom have no force precog or anything? All force sensitives have varying degrees of precog and he is more or less equivalent to a Knight, he really should have felt that coming.

AmusinglyAimless

I'd prefer you to continue this story.

Kasikan

I never got why he let Ave live. He was going to kill a Hutt and take over. There was no reason to keep a Hutt around if he was going to be taking over and not having a puppet Hutt do so. Ave should have died before or right after the attack occurred on Zorba. Keeping a Hutt around is always a stupid choice. Pilar, well I'd expect people from Cyberpunk to be morons who would sell out their own mothers. So that's not too surprising. Hopefully they'll make his death quick, but horrifically painful.

Zai

Tftc. I'd really like this story to continue anyways and if you want to keep writing more then that's just a positive. The hault on the voting ain't much of a loss if we can get consistent chapters about something enjoyable.

Laplase

I honestly hope that he can sleep fight or that the force either wakes him right up or uses his body to kick some ass. Also, DEAD END IS COMING BACK!!!

Big ToFu

I want to say I didn’t see that cliff coming but yeah, once I saw the scroll bar near the end when Becca finally got some, I knew something was up.

Adam Daw

Thanks for the chapter. Hopefully this betrayal trash doesn't take too long.

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Amazing work as always dry keep it up WOOOOO DEAD END IS COMING BACK LETS GOOOO

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

I feel like I should’ve seen pilars betrayal coming still tho I can’t believe he betrayed him just as he was about to get it on with becca not cool dude

Hiram

Ohhh shit Pilar will burn for that

dryskies_btb

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