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The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8

🕑 Added 2024-07-25 01:32:19 +0000 UTC
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.8

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dryskies_btb

Ah, thank you. I'll correct it.

Sean Robbins

< Mind: 80+3=81/200+ > something seems a little wrong here...

RedEve

Yes I understand that it makes other characters more relevant and have not just be there. But the main character should have more distinction and be better and stronger

General_Rain

Fun fact i remember that Lady Barbrey Dustin in the North is a widow at this time and currently only has Domeric Bolton her nephew as a possible heir to the Barrow Town lordship if he has not yet been killed by Ramsey Snow his bastard born half brother. If he is alive he should probably be in the Vale as a squire training to become a knight at this time. If he was kept alive he would make a possibly positive change with his two lordships though the distance between Dreadfort and Barrow Town would make things difficult. Most nobles have a very superstitious view about marrying a widows but if old Walder Frey with his several deceased wives is an example the opposite is not the same. So unless one of the men in Hogwarts want to marry Lady Dustin to birth a new heir Domeric Bolton is a rather important to the future of their school as if I remember the map right the Dreadfort of house Bolton is right by where you placed the school.

Based_Bass

Albus and our boy are only Lord and Lord presumptive of Hogwarts. They don’t really have the authority to offer or accept betrothals on behalf of their students. I’m sure that’s going to be a whole thing later. If Jon wants a witch bride he’s gonna have to do it the old fashioned way…but Jon do have that rizz.

Based_Bass

Man Albus and Olenna are going to get along like a house on fire. I’m both anticipating and dreading how that’s going to go. Either way it’ll be interesting.

QuantumServer

Thanks for the chaoter!

dryskies_btb

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GreedOnGreed

Apparently the compass is already out and so it will mean that the IronBorn will become even more annoying, too bad, perhaps the North could get some ships with copper clad hulls to deal with them but it would be better if Hogwarts at least kept the steel ships for the their possible future kingdom. I hope that Atlas will kill the abyssal god knowing that he is a Pseudo-Cthulhu but to prevent him from returning they should also erase his religion. Could Atlas temporarily become the Storm God or Avatar of him if most of the IdiotBorn began to believe in him by pouring their faith into him? Some reasons why this might happen would be: pet kraken, Ravens are the messengers of the Storm God, Atlas is the strongest ravenclaw, Luna is a raven-animagus, army on brooms that bomb ships from the sky, Heather can fly without a broom and throw lightning but if he wanted he could do it too. Faceless have the house of the black and white and I wonder how they will react to Atlas Black White, the deathly hallows and nymphadora. The Gemino spell is supposed to be harder to cast in this world but it creates permanent copies since the food could be eaten? letting the supremacists go would be a big mistake since they don't know the culture of this world and would abuse spells such as: confondus, obliviate, love potions, imperius and etc.; most of them just want to lord it over others but for those who want to play the game of conquest I think some politically acceptable targets currently would be wildlings and pirate islands. Within one or two generations they will be forced to expand because many will want their own homes but they could go to Sothoryos as it has a lot of free space being Mega-Australia. How difficult would it be to create a secret island on a leyline crossing in the ocean? Will Hogwarts have appeared on a leyline crossing? I believe the book looking for school members is fanon but if it exists would it find the people of this world and would it only cover this continent? House Elf and Forest Children… I think if Atlas trained for a year in a muggle style gym his physical stats would have grown much more and other ways to improve the body would be to increase the gravity in the room of requirement, rituals, they could make some potions and Snape he might have a little bit of Rem blood.

General_Rain

If I remember correctly the ruler of Dorn has gout or some other illness that keeps his legs from working right and causes constant pain and he has to use milk of the poppy to dull the pain. A visit to Madam Poppy and a potion or two should fix that gaining them another southern lords house as allies. Their family is related by blood to the old Targaryen royal family so both his son and daughter as well as his brother's bastard daughters should all have magic potential like Jon Snow does making them viable new students for Hogwarts.

General_Rain

Something that the Wizards could do for lord Stark is once the finished building their town is rebuild castle Moat Cailin and use magic to create a new moat/canal connecting the east and west coasts allowing house Manderly to send ships to defend the North from ironborn raids. If they build locks along the new canal like Panama they could collect fees for merchants to use the route. The land of Moat Cailin belongs to lord Stark so he could gift the lordship of the area to Jon Snow/Stark and betroth Jon to either a witch or one of the many daughters of house Mormont. Building the canal would also allow the lords of the North to skip the twin castles of house Frey and the save the double tolls they charge. Pretty much nobody likes house Frey in cannon.

General_Rain

You also have not mentioned any of the ghosts of Hogwarts so far to see how news of them could affect the locals especially how followers of the seven would react to meeting say the Fat Friar's ghost for instance. That would be a barrel of laughs to hear about for sure.

General_Rain

The best things to sell long term for Hogwarts are mundane and magical items that don't already have a competitor like the wagon idea or creating bathhouses and indoor plumbing. Fire whiskey, butter beer, and even recreating some of the confiscated Zonko's magic toys from Filch's office would be interesting idea to sell in bulk. If they make glass or jewelry they would become enemies with the house Lannister and city of Myre.

General_Rain

The simplest thing the Weasley twins could do to advance technology with smithing would be recreating a version of shock absorbers used in cars. If they add them to merchant carts and the older students upgrade all the roads in the North it would improve the speed of travel for trade and troop logistics for future wars. I remember when King Robert Baratheon went to make Ned Stark the new King's Hand his family wasted months traveling in the massive cart called a wheelhouse. Nobles and merchants would likely pay a great deal of gold for an enchanted wagon or carriage with expanded interior space with magic lamps. Even just having Professor Flitwick design storage chests with featherweight, storage space expansion, and possibly food preservation enchantments would save the North lords a fortune when preparing for their years long winters.

TheRavenbrand

I like the magical eruption bit. Ty

DerkKill

Another thing to think about is that you have to detail certain cultural festivities and what better than gastronomy; also introduce new musical styles; since certain idiots want to be free to do stupid things before they leave, they sign a contract not to divulge castle secrets under any circumstances.

DerkKill

Remembering a certain point you could introduce certain medical professions like dentistry or ophthalmology; and then how to classify certain medical mental conditions; also introduce better and various tools that we assume the children of Muggles could provide.

DerkKill

This is another idea, since the maidens daughters of noble families are so repressed, you could anonymously distribute erotic novels aimed at the female public and also introduce certain fetishes but that are not so extreme, just stimulating; and recreate vehicles for certain situations, both mundane and work-related.

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

CkLance

LMAO! Olenna: My granddaughter is suddenly bloody magical! Headmaster Dumbledore, you and yours WILL help and guide her to become her best self! This stipulation is NON-NEGOTIABLE! 😂

Joseph

Don’t know why but the mc of this story just feels always so weak(?) like with his advantages I feel he should be much more impactful but I’ve never thought of him as being strong, like professor with a system should be stronger than the students at the bare minimum but he on a regular basis gets beat by them it feels like. Part of that’s from what I remember of the first arc but it also feels like it’s going a similarly way in this one too

Vinicius Vieira

Just me who wants to see what happens when something gets to 100/100? Like, Will It upgrade to a more advanced subject or stay the same, a Lot of questiona haha, ty 4 the chap

JayFireblood

Really want to see what happens when he maxs out something

Marius Petrauskas

great update

Handyandy

Would it be possible to include names or sources for the bonus pics if you have them? Asking for a friend


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