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The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14

🕑 Added 2024-08-13 01:19:34 +0000 UTC
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.14

Comments

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, I really like how you wrote the Dornish and the idea of a purposefully botched cosmetic charm is kind of horrifying to think about. Stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

General_Rain

With a modified version of the bubble head charm that covers the whole body a group of witches and wizards could even visit Valyria to hunt for treasures. Bright Roar the heirloom of house Lannister is said to have been lost there during the Doom. With the pointing spell the sword and other lost relics could be easily found. It would be hilarious to see what Lord Tywin would do if the sword had secretly been stolen by the Maesters at Old Town all those years ago. We all know how he treated the nobles that stole from his family in the past.

General_Rain

Something that the Hogwarts team could do is make an accurate map of each of the kingdoms of Westeros and then explore the surrounding oceans to make better navigation charts/maps for the White Harbor ships to use with their new compasses. They could use brooms and that invisibility charm the older students learn or Heathers invisibility cloak to do so without being seen.

DerkKill

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General_Rain

As a side note, we know Professor Severus has to use glass or crystal vials for storing potions. Now that Myr is the closest/only store to resupply and their legendary lack of quality or customer service. I imagine that either Hogwarts will eventually make their own superior glass or just take over Myr. It is a merchant city they wouldn't even really need to fight them if they fall for a pureblood corporate hostile takeover scheme.

General_Rain

It would be funny if Atlas copies the dragon egg they received from Lord Stannis and permanently transfigure some large rocks to look like dragon eggs. They could sell them to the slavers for all the available unsullied troops. Since the gelding they received during training is not done with a curse Poppy probably has a spell or potion to heal it. That would make them able to have a family and as the show taught us they make a great loyal army if you treat them right. With five thousand Unsullied and about a dozen members of Slytherin reinforcements Blaze could easily become the new ruler of Volantis.

General_Rain

Well there goes Lord Blaze off to conquer Volantis in the near future possibly with some Dornish girlfriends along with his Hogwarts crew. They have no idea how bord the witchs & wizards of Slytherin house must be after two years in Westeros without quidditch. Since they are hiding the use of brooms to fly, and no major fights against Gryffindor means they are a powder keg eager to explode into action.

TheRavenbrand

Oh, the boltons gonna die. The Second Boy-Who-Lived is gonna have some real anger at what the Boltons have been doing to innocent people. I case people forgot, Neville was there when the Death Eaters tortured his parents. He survived their attack and thus became a boy-who-lived.

Sebastian

Hey can u please fix holdoor I have a feeling he is different if he had all his card in a deck

QuantumServer

Thanks for the chapter!

dryskies_btb

That's about accurate. The Southern plotline is mostly reserved for Atlas and his girls. Blaise kicks off the Eastern plotline here but Neville will mostly carry that one. And then Jon and Cedric will stay in the North and go beyond the Wall. The next chapters should be Atlas's POV and then Neville's POV (w/ the Boltons lol), then likely Atlas again before we get Cedric's POV of the King's visit to Winterfell.

Marius Petrauskas

great stuff

Based_Bass

Lol that went about as well as expected. Also damn Lavender…that shit is brutal. Intentionally botched cosmetic charms are not a thing I think I ever wanted to imagine.

jp9901

Nah, a Brazilian wax has to be an unforgivable to these men! Can I just say that I love how you've portrayed all these characters, they have their memorable quirks and traits but they aren't one dimensional (Fleur is still iffy to me, needs to tone it down on the praise a little)!

TheRavenbrand

You know what this means? Longer story and definitely interesting.

JO LP

dryskies already said in a comment for chapter 12 that there are three concurrent main plotlines planned for this story. North, South and East. I'm guessing we just got a peak at the start of the East plotline, despite them currently being in the south, it seems events will push them eastward. I don't think this is the South plotline. My theory for that one is that it will deal with the Citadel and the Faith, while the East will deal with slavery and the North will deal with he Iron Throne and hopefully White Walker that are less underwhelming than what we got in the show.

DamnedThrice

That's fair. Its just hard to keep track of so many characters which each have their own plotlines. And those are just the HP characters.

TheRavenbrand

One for each kingdom. Have to get the lay of the land before our boy moves. You have to have all the pieces in writing before you have the main character move. Otherwise you wouldnt know why something happened, for what reason and you don't want details that could be a chapter to be a throw away line.

TheRavenbrand

Yes yes!

DamnedThrice

As much as I love exposition, the more characters you focus chapters on, the more difficult following the story becomes. That was honestly my biggest grip with ASOIAF. So I'm kinda hoping there isn't another 6 to 10 chapters of following characters who aren't the MC.


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