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The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25

🕑 Added 2024-09-27 23:43:47 +0000 UTC
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25
The Grind (Book 2) Ch.25

Comments

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, in regards to your burn out that is perfectly understandable. You've been writing this for a long while and while I have greatly enjoyed it, I can only imagine how the POV shifts have been grating slightly. I look forward to what you come up with for your next project, please do take all the time you need. Stay safe out there and keep up the good work!

DerkKill

Most agree that you should take a break and then come back with new energy; the other thing is that just because of promiscuity you should mark Margaery's belly with a lascivious tattoo that she would love; the other thing is that Atlas still does not marry his Coven according to their customs before he does it with Margaery so that there is no quarrel over customs on both sides.

GreedOnGreed

if you're lacking inspiration it's best to pause the story to avoid burning yourself out, I think the constant jumping between POVs is very distracting, maybe at least 2-3 chapters of Atlas followed by an interlude of his girls and then another 2-3 chapters of the MC followed by the perspectives of the others could perhaps give a little more continuity making the story seem to move faster and perhaps with fewer hitches? I suspect you've been focusing too much on the others forgetting that Atlas is the MC.

dryskies_btb

I think I'm going to come back to it soon enough. ASOIAF is just one of those worlds that sticks in your head (at least, in mine). And like I said, I do have more stuff planned for this story. Maybe I just need a few chapters of celestial grimoire fuckery or mindless smutty degeneracy or BIG DRAGON™ to recuperate.

Azzuma

If you need to take a break please do, I'd rather this story go on hiatus for a while then you get burnt out. If you're looking for ideas I'd like to see you write something from Marvel in a similar vein to your Gotham story.

JO LP

While I would be sad to have this story put in the backburner, it would be far worse if you were to force yourself to write something you have no inspiration for and end up rushing or ruining it just to get it over with.

CkLance

Yeah, please don't force yourself to write for a story you can't find inspiration for.

dryskies_btb

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