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29. Aenys V / Visenya V / Martyn I

🕑 Added 2024-07-28 15:07:31 +0000 UTC

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Morel

They didn’t support Aegon and Rhaena. They just refused to hand them over to Maegor. Which shows that they have a rebellious streak. Not to mention that Aegon has shown weakness and they see a chance at independence.

Mars Salvador

Why the lannisters starting a coup when they supported aegon and rhaena during maegor reign in the original?

Morel

Hmm, certainly an interesting take. Would Maegor really turn his nieces and nephews away out of hand if what you said comes to pass? Not to mention the only Velaryon he has issues with is Alyssa. If you read the edits to chapter 31, Maegor is considering Daemon Velaryon's daughter as a potential match for Daeron or Baelor if he cannot get a sister or cousin for them.

Bobby Hill

Doesn't take much to see where this is going. Let me guess, Maegor will choose what he has in Essos and Aenys will Die, leaving his family to flee to House Velaryon, who will also be besieged. House Velaryon is then forced to flee to Maegor, where he largely stays out if not outright telling them to fuck off before the Hightowers drag him into this.

Sukhraj Singh

I see, it looks like the Hightowers are planing a rebellion for when Aegon finally dies, they are banking on Aenys being a weak king and Maegor not returning to help him when the rebellion breaks out. Its fortunate that they do not know Maegor at all, as Maegor does genuinely love his brother and will come to his aid when the time comes, and he will be coming with a battle hardened army at his back. I hope that in this story, Maegor will not hesistate to burn Oldtown to the ground and kill the High Septon and the Most Decount, sometimes the only way to hammer the message in it to make it absolutely clear that the old world is dead and not returning. Even if the Westerlands decide to support the Faith in its uprising, the most they can do is hide in their mountain while Maegor depopulates the Westerlands via dragonfire, it will be hard to be lord of anything, if you do not have any people. If Alyssa causes problems when Maegor returns I hope that Visenya or Shiera or Maegor will arrange for her die and remove any influence she has on her children.

Loyalist

Aegon is proving himself quite the selfish person I understand not wanting to interfere or being angry to Maegor but such an indifference towards his son is simply inexcusable and stupid I mean, your son won the greatest battle since the Wars of Spices between Valyria and the Ghiscari, more people died then during the field of fire and he did everything with a single dragon. He practically destroyed the army of a major player in the power balance of Essos. Thing are going to change and there will be consequences. Aenys proved himself a coward. Sad because he doesn’t seem as useless as Viserys, hopefully Maegor will help him and push him on the right path. At least he is a good parent and loves his sibling. In that he is already better than Aegon. Still think that it would be hilarious if Rhaena developed a crush on ( or fell in love with) Maegor. Can you imagine how Alyssa would react?🤣 Orys and Visenya are right in saying that trouble is brewing and when it will come, hopefully Aenys will be ready for Fire and Blood. Then again, maybe Maegor reputation will help scaring some people, since here he is a proven warrior and dragon rider So sad that Visenya didn’t go and conquer Dorne herself. It would have been nice to get revenge for Orys and Visenya. Finally a nice sibling moment for our Queen❤️ I really appreciated the changes you made to chapter 25 It’s much more descriptive and it gives us a better perspective on how the candles work in that context. Beautiful chapter and can’t wait for more ❤️

Morel

Lmao, burning a city of well over 500k people to the ground would be risky and why burn down what you can take over?

Bobby Hill

Perhaps you should have Raymont Baratheon go east as well? Canonically nobody knows what happened to him after he prevented Aenys' assassination but I'm sure he died to Maegor at some point. So perhaps in this TL Raymont instead goes east, and joins Maegor's Sellsword company. As for the Company, you should have Maegor organize it along the standards of the Roman Legion where instead of alot of Eagle heraldry, it finds itself with Dragon Heraldry. I also suggest burning Pentos to the ground and rebuilding it under a new name to denote your intentions. Perhaps the City should be called... Rome?

Mrsean22

Well Aegon is basically doing nothing. Which isn't a surprise. Aegon isn't gonna do anything if someone actually rebels but that isn't gonna happen long as Aegon lives. Aenys is just trying to enjoy his life with with kids which is understandable. Though Aenys has some political smarts it's ruined by him not wanting to act. Visenya going to the Vale and Stormlands to gather volunteers to help Maegor and basically join the Sellsword company. Not surprising the Vale wanting to go. They have a pretty good opinion of Visenya and Maegor. Stormlands is more a open question but can see some knights and second sons going but yeah Marchers can't go. Visenya and Orys seem to agree Aenys isn't a strong ruler so they are expecting rebellions in the future. With thinking Aenys is going to fail or call back Maegor to fix everything. Which sounds about right even if Alyssa argues against bringing Maegor and his line back.

Morel

I was actually planning on mentioning her but Argella never really fit into this chapter. I was planning on Visenya and Orys remarking that if Orys had a daughter all of their troubles would be solved. Argella is alive. Unfortunately, I could not figure out a way to put this in the chapter.

Amit Efraim

yooo thanks for the chapter its nice to see Visenya pov again and hear of the accomplishment of maegor in the east

Arcturus

Yeah mommy Visenya the best!!! Let's more warriors go to Black Army(or Black Legion, or even Sons of Maegor hello Warhammer, not sure what autor would like to name this army)😁😁😁👍 Aegon as always magot pussy and Aenys weakling idiot without spine. Only true Dragonlord and scion of Valyria could save House of Dragon and Westeros' unity🤝 What about Argella by the way? Is she still alive or not? If not, you know Visenya and Orys are both adult people with their needs and they trust each other the most in this world right? After all family business is such Targaryen' thing 😏🙃


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