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30. Shiera XI / Aeron VII

🕑 Added 2024-08-04 16:00:35 +0000 UTC

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Reese Apperson

Good chapter! I would have preferred the name Aurion or Aenar but thats a minor complaint. I can imagine a future where Shiera's daughter has red eyes and that makes the boys obsessed with her, thus leading to everyone outside the family being like 'boys from Maegors line prefer rubies to amethysts'. Another thing I'm hoping is that Meagor invests in Aeron to go on a trade mission to Yi Ti a couple generations before Corlys. Cant' wait for the next chapter and keep on the good work!

Omar

Nice chapter! But I am wondering, what happened to the prince of Pentos and the faction that wants Maegor gone?

Arcturus

Yep Aeron reaction and thoughts are really messy, I mean dude everything that you achieved and has, you should thank your patron! Of course Maegor would get all praises as creator, leader and main sponsor of Black Company, he is CEO in modern terminology after all Hope Aeron will grown from jealous younger brother, because he is talented guy, who became renowned figure in Essos and respected general of his own, but he should remember that Maegor is his sovereign and patron

Morel

He does have some issues but I mean. A story with no drama would be quite boring no?

Morel

I will go ahead and say that Shiera will not claim a dragon. That is a right for only Targs and it would take a truly fucked situation for Shiera to be pushed into claiming a dragon. Though she probably could just based off blood.

Mrsean22

Well things seem to be going good for Maegors group but have some issues still. To be fair for Shiera and Visenya. Without canon knowledge it would seem weird to think Aenys would lift the banishment as years go by. Aeron honestly seems to be getting jealous of Maegor even though he basically has everything he said he wanted. I imagine Aeron is very respected in the army but not respected as Maegor. Doesn't help that the army probably knows that Maegor is the one to organize the company like it is now.

Morel

Thank you!

Dragonslayer29

Thanks for the chap. But damn does the Mc have some issues ahead with both his family and friends with him in essos and those in westros. I do hope his sons get dragons because I always like OC dragons in fanfics like this. I do hope she has a daughter since the Alyssa would definitely try to poison her childern against his children.Thanks for the great chap can’t wait for the next.

Arcturus

Nice and warm chapter! Good that Shiera manage family budget because usually clever woman is much better in it, know from self experience😅 Nice to see real people with their issues and conflicts even when it's the closest and most important people. Typical situation for every family I would say, in first years of marriage And good that she thinks about her sons' dragons. By the way, she also as distant Targaryen scion and magic practicer has a good chances with dragons! She could try luck with hatchling too, or wait till Vhagar become free and till that moment spend as much as can time with both queens(of men and dragons) As wife of prince, she has all rights for it. Just imagine Alyssa's face😂😂😂 And by the way about Company. Maybe they choose name Blackwaters(hilarious reference😅😂😏) or start calling themselves Army(because they have full-time contacts with city-states and that more prestigious than usual mercenary contract for short periods. Maegor could implement ranks of Captain-general for leader and Lieutenant-general for sub-leader of his forces, because Captain who command 20 000 men is too much😅🙃 Captains in medieval armies usually commanded 200-600 men, than go colonels who lead 1000-5000 regiment(like spanish tercio or swiss battalias), brigade like temporarily union of a few regiments lead by brigade generals and than army lead by generals or who had Lieutenant-general as their second-in-command usually they lead cavalry

Loyalist

Two of Maegor most important people find themselves not satisfied I guess we will see soon what is going one in Maegor head Hopefully Shiera will be able to have a daughter Beautiful chapter and very curious for the future


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