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Chapter 12: Red Mist(letoe)

🕑 Added 2024-02-21 18:40:40 +0000 UTC

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Bar Calak

I'd like to run a quick experiment this month to evaluate what best suits members. I'll figure it out - might do a poll later to better get insight.

Bar Calak

I actually wrote this chapter specifically after our conversation regarding a non work interaction between the kids. You and many others had the wonderful advice to have an outside perspective look at Bas as well.

Rivo

Idk about anyone else, but I prefer reading the chapters in a big bunch. But spacing them out probably gets more engagement.

Pope Yoda I

I like the insights into MCs mind from the perspective of other characters. You have a talent at mixing in character growth through nonlinear displays. I wouldn't mind seeing MC credit working with Alan Rickman or other role models when he inevitably finds himself on stage receiving an award. I also greatly liked the scene in the beginning. MC using his power for good v 'evil' later in the chapter was a nice contrast.


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