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🕑 Added 2025-08-28 18:26:43 +0000 UTCGuys, what a hellish August! 🥵🥵🥵🥵
Every year it gets worse, I'm so happy autumn is coming... to celebrate... starting September 1st, I'll start decorating my house in a Halloween theme!! That way I'll have a sense of it!
Anyway, let's talk about the comic, and in later posts I'll show you all the other things I did in August. Oh, it'll be funny... I was involved, since I didn't seek out all these Italian commissions! They reached out to me and contacted me, and... it seemed easier.
To begin, please revisit page 75 https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/75/ because it has been updated with the text corrections, which I made following Erold's precious suggestions and... a few of my own. I hope I haven't made too many mistakes and that it's now a little more appropriate than before!
Then enjoy page 76! https://pleasurebonbon-next.com/comics/volume/1/page/76/ Without tracing I redid a couple of panels, the one you see I saved with the file name "Escape Room". I love both styles, both versions, you can tell I used to draw with a pen on paper, how dirty the line is, but it's nice because it looks a bit like a Victorian engraving (or maybe I'm trying to justify myself by giving it a distinction haha).
I don't know if it's clear, but in the last panel there's a reference to a popular folk song I often heard as a child. And they even adapted it into Italian, mind you, but it was sung by a girl who later became a very famous Italian singer (Rita Pavone), and the lyrics had a more adolescent vibes.
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Kanbe Namura
Firstly I want to apologize for the late reply on your post, Vanessa. @.@ Secondly, I'm sorry the August summer in Italy was torture for you. :< (Even though the Summer is what I live for every year. </////<) But I'm glad the month of September brightens your mood for the upcoming Halloween month in October. :D Finally, I LOVE THE NEW PAGE!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD IT'S SO FREAKING INCREDIBLE! ^;;^ I love seeing Betty and Violet having some hot yuri sex! >w< And I think this version did a better job of Willian trying to get away, but his two "friends" are forcing him to stay. XD Thank you for the awesome Italian trivia fact for the last panel. ^w^ And as always, I look forward to what the next page will bring. X3
Erold
Indeed, the summer keep getting hotter and hotter... Non bene... So how is the Halloween decorations going? :P You've been taking commissions? Darn. Now I'm jealous. :P Yes, it'll be very interesting to se what have been asked of you. Whatever they are, I know they'll be beautiful. :) Ah yes! I'm trying not giving myself too much credit here, but this is a very pleasant and clear read. Well done! :D Oh here we go with the new page! :D I gotta say, good job with the text! I have no suggestions, except one: I think Will is supposed to think "Man" rather than "Men." In the legacy comic, Will used the expression "Man" back then, and everything else is the sentence is the same in this version except that word. This is of course assuming that Will is indeed using it as an exclamation, and is not in fact actually commenting on that there are two other men in the room with him. Other than that, I like how you switched the roles of Betty and Violet. Now it's Betty crying out in pleasure and Violet telling her to "give up." :P I also like that it doesn't end there like in the legacy version... I've heard about this "multiple orgasms" that women can have ... but I have yet to meet a woman who has actually gone for it. I keep hearing that they are "too sore" after the first one... Is this really the first time Betty is experiencing this? Oh? What popular folk song? I'm not English or American so I wouldn't know. :P
