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Shaman's trial
🕑 Added 2017-10-12 13:28:41 +0000 UTCOrks again^^
Let me know about mistakes in text.
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Flick
Thanks, I'll fix it
Simiusmagnus
I'm enjoying this series. One note on the dialogue, though. After "Oh, Gruumshia, Mother of Orcs, it should be "Does this humie deserve to unite..." or "Is this humie deserving of uniting..."
Simiusmagnus
Yeah, that would be right. And "Regarding the last point" sounds strangely formal, especially considering they're fucking. Just something like "Aren't you getting a little ahead of yourself?" would work well there.
Flick
Thanks!
I love These orcs :O
Flick
may be. It supposed to be idiom means she is ahead of events with talk about offspring. But I'm not sure if it's right in english.
Flick
Thanks!
The Silver Socialist
Did you mean to "you are getting a little ahead of yourself"?
Brian
Superb art!
That black guy
Orc GF cleared the Elf with him right?
