Goblin girl 1
🕑 Added 2018-03-12 15:42:54 +0000 UTC Goblin-chan and some of hobgoblin-chan^^Let me know about mistakes in the text.
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The Silver Socialist
It would be interesting to see what kind of adventure they would have to go on to get Hummies smart phone back.
Flick
Ok, thanks
The Silver Socialist
"Hummie" should say "That thing won't work for long without a charger" it would sound more natural that way.
The Silver Socialist
I wonder what's going to happen with that smartphone. I bet the goblins are going to have some gremlins reverse engineer it.
Flick
Thanks!
Flick
She doesn't mind.
Flick
yes)
Dr.S.Shenanigans
Suggestions, no coma before magical thing. "I thought you liked bondage, but you're just a theif" "Maybe we cannot make such clever mechanism as dwarfs do" "I'll take your gold too!" "Did Mr. Human decide to surprise and comfort the poor widow?" "or, did you run out money and decided to pay me with your body?" "I guess I can give you a discount" "What are those groans coming out of that dupe's room?"
The Silver Socialist
Was "hummie" going to cheat on Grash?
Not going to point out the grammar, since, I assume, they have eclectic speech and accents.
Outierin
Hobgoblin-Chan is a cutie, can we see more of her?