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🕑 Added 2018-07-06 14:34:13 +0000 UTC Angry videogame daemonette of Slaanesh.Let me know about mistakes in the text.
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The Silver Socialist
I think you may want to consider having your character say "I fucked your mom" instead of "I fuck your mom!
The Silver Socialist
I think you should say "My Monitor! That's the third one this week!"
Esper
Ah, girlfriends
Flick
Я к сожалению, не играл в доту, поэтому решил не шутить про рак на миде, не шаря в сабже)
Flick
Thanks
Flick
Thanks!
Flick
Thanks! Yeah, my English's worst. Could you say where the odd choices and how to fix them?
"third on the week" i think you meant "Third one this week" or "That's the third one this week" but i like the drawing. their are quite a few odd choices in your dialog that betray the fact English is not your first language. you're doing a good job, its just not typical to phrase things like that. no hate, love your art.
Animeplayer
That is adorable. XD
DAHR
Рачина! гыгы.
Dr.S.Shenanigans
Heh nice...minor suggestion but "third one this week"
Malhavoc
The simple answer is she needs to pray to Slaanesh for tentacles. They are the multipurpose tool for all situations.
