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🕑 Added 2019-12-23 09:29:08 +0000 UTCTogruta jedi got into a difficult situation.
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William Richard Bragg
Quite interesting
Flick
Ok, thank you)
Terrarkul
Since you asked for english feedback: - "You won't be able to resist my massassi for a long time, Jedi!" would be better as "You won't be able to resist my massassi for long, Jedi!" - "He is right, I am losing touch with force." should be "He is right, I am losing touch with the force." The Force is always referred to with a 'the' in front of it in Star Wars. - "And where is my stupid padawan at such a moment?" I would rephrase as "And where is my stupid padawan at a time like this?"
Flick
Thanks!
Jay Aury
Very dynamic. I love how you drew the Massassi!
