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Dimetrius 63?!

🕑 Added 2023-05-08 10:59:07 +0000 UTC
Dimetrius 63?!

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PhilosoShy

it's a callidus assassin XD (BEST Assassins! XD)

Flick

ok, thanks

Shane Wegner

It makes me feel presumptuous to dare to suggest anything about the comic, but it specifically asks in the tagline so I actually have a text suggestion for panel one. "Didn't Dimetrius come into his cell five minutes ago?" is a logically not incorrect sentence, but it's so formal my brain is finding it confusing and just shrugging and going to the next panel. I could pretend it's High Gothic though! The confusion comes from two sources- the third person reference to Dimetrius (I forgot that's this character's name since I'm still kinda new to the comic) and "come into" instead of "go". Third person use of someone's name as a respectful distancer when you're talking directly to them, making it basically a 2nd person situation, is very rare in English. It's more natural to still use "you", but then add "sir" or "m'lord" at the end to create that distance. Oh! Or 3rd person replacement of the name with "m'lord" also flows naturally. And the phrase "come into his cell" is a little awkward, my instincts are expecting variations of "go" in this case, rather than come. Proposed counter-suggestions: "Um, didn't you just go in there a few minutes ago, sir?" or perhaps "Uh, didn't m'lord just enter his room?" I hope these explanations help!

UNDRESS_ME

Well. looks like he's going to explore his female version))) Great...I hope he'll be ok after this 😊😊

Duran

Callidus assassin?!

Crowe-le-retour

Hooo yeah! Finelly, Callidus Assassin!!

Brandon. A

I was wondering when we would get a follow up to Slanneshi Dimetrius. :)

Chordat

Polymorphine is a hell of a drug, kids! ;)

Malhavoc

Either a Callidus, or some sort of Tzeentch Daemon. Probably a Callidus though.

Clem Barbarossa

Callidus assassin? ;)


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