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Of Arms and Arcane: Chapter 130

🕑 Added 2024-08-12 14:13:11 +0000 UTC

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Samofthepen

Yeah, got the idea in my head, and next thing i knew, i was 3/4 way done with the chapter, so decided to follow thru. thanks for the feedback. Time skip coming relitively soon.

John

Thanks for the chapter! Just wanted to share my feedback as an avid RR reader and not leave a poor review that would impact your work/motivation. I feel like some of the chapters recently do not add to or progress the story in a meaningful way. I think it is a good story and has good characters but this is essentially the same chapter as the last from a different POV and pretty short. You could merge them into two if you felt they both were needed. It seems like you may be burning out or feeling the need to pump out chapters. I would suggest either taking a slower approach that feels better to you or redefining your approach tot he chapters you release to keep it more engaging and not have fillers. Just some friendly feedback. Thanks again for the chapter and I hope you have a great week!

Raymond Mouton

Thanks for the chapter.


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