Burn the World Down - Chapter 28: Converging Shadows

DaoistEditor

Idk seen him active on discord recently so he should be alive, i hope

MongoStomp910

Fucking called it.

Real_Proster

Is there any news about the upcoming chapter yet?

Raven

Obedience only applies when he gives her a direct order. She’s not going to say no when he directly orders her to do something even if she hates him, but that doesn’t stop her from planning against him if he’s not there.

MongoStomp910

I’ll admit I’m posting this comment only a few chapters into this so my knowledge is behind the times but Azula’s obedience is at 100 even if her rep is -100 so it should be LITERALLY impossible for her to betray Khan and that leads me to believe this is happening because of him. Unless the author forgot about that but idk.

Tristan Taylor

Anyone know what is going on? Hoping the author is okay.

Ben Aomarere

Very wise

Brandon

Bring

Author says he’ll be consistent then fucks off it’s the same problem with jordinio great writing but it’s just not there enough for me to pay cash

Raven

If you check his Questionable Questing account, he was active on there last Friday.

Daddy Ivan

Considering the update post, I’m assuming this author has either been hospitalized or is out of commission. Which sucks, cause this shit was a masterpiece

C2o

Same

Xi

Ah, got switch and baited to subscribe again thinking updates would be coming in after this. lol nope. I hope you’re doing well, but this radio silence is kinda frustrating dude

Daddy Ivan

THIS SHIT IS TOO GOOD MAN. Please don’t let it die. You’re not even a fourth of the way through and it’s already the best ATLA story I’ve read.

innocuousApathy

He’s still up, probably just stuck on the newest chapter

Raven

I do hope that we get a double update next time

Xi

You got any more of those updates *scratches neck*

Xi

Nah, I’m sure Azula is a good girl now. You can’t spell good without Azula-oh wait…

Brandon

Give them little while

Nightbat

I’m just saying that it sounded like Ch 29 was already finished that’s all.

Raven

They just went through cancer. Give them some time to update at their own pace

Nightbat

It says the next update is in 24 hours. And it’s been 2 days.

Raven

Can’t wait for the update!

Jackle The First

Can’t wait for the fallout of Khan conquering the entire North Pole. While trying to kill him, Azula and her “Pons” just add to his prestige.

Ullie

Anya pretty much spoiled Azula being "redeemed" if the readers don't understand that I don't know what to say.

Nicholas Johnson

Love it! Keep up the stellar work!

Daddy Ivan

Shit is great. Gonna be fun if the Kyoshi warriors run into Azula. Greatly looking forward to more reactions on Khans face. It’ll be hilarious with all that shit he’s done in the snow now

JustaDude

Of course Azula isn't turning into a hero. She still has to have Khan's babies.

Plague

I don't think azula hates khan, she clearly lust after his body. I can't wait for iroh and zuko to see khan they're going to be so surprised

heh

Oh sorry I don’t mean to just write criticism. Thanks for the chapter it was a great one! (:

Robert

Great chapter

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

Thanks for your hardwork info looking forward to the next one !

heh

Anya’s paragraph about Azula’s butt hurting was typed twice. Also “waku waku” is typically meant to express that the speaker is excited about something that is happening or about to happen