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Burn the World Down 32

🕑 Added 2024-10-23 13:33:01 +0000 UTC
Burn the World Down 32

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Salih Mustafa

Not gonna lie loved this chap the 3 nations stuff is nice just the Aang part was really tragic and graphic always felt a bit bad for bro in canon but this was something else 😭, can't wait for what's next , l loved Zhao's whole and it didn't end by betraying him the whole give him your flame like it's a spirit bomb 🤣

SImax ArAtA

I did not think that there would be a continuation, more concern about your health, but I will not say that I am very glad. The end caused two feelings. On the one hand, Zhao is Great, who gave emotions 800% good reviews, and then even crazier Azula, to be honest, crazy is not the part that many people love. They love the same Azula from the second season. Next, Qatar and all this nonsense with 10,000 against 1000, cool, but I want to develop further, it would be interesting to look at the Third Wave personally wants retribution for this whole adventure, because it is a spark of Resistance. Dalek, Kyoshi Warriors, they are probably the main joy of this book, neither Jun, nor Yor and Anya (whom I can't stand), it is Kyoshi. I hope for their quick return, or Suyuki's return, the others are out of the game and they will be replaced by the Tai Lee sisters. I want to see how Han treats Mei, Tai Li, Ursa (a great influence on Zuko), Toph (hopefully as a friend), and possibly other kameo. And then Princess Yui, well, I hope she doesn't stay at the North Pole. She just recently appeared in the chapters and chronologies inside the book. And it would be interesting to take it with you, and I believe that you will write it perfectly. Like, we have Anya, a comedic character who is just funny (not for me). I'll say about the plot, it was fucking awesome, except for the part with Kyoshi and the Kyoshi Warriors. Otherwise, I wish you good health, a writer's mood and other pleasures. (And yes, alas, like everyone else, I am selfishly waiting for a new chapter as soon as possible, please forgive me)

Kz3838

Thank you for the great chapter, I'm assuming Suki and the others are in the spirit world somewhere. Here's to hoping that they are found safely. That said, Zhao had a truly magnificent send off. I hope you are well, stay safe out there!

Elvwyn

Truly Zhao will forever be remembered as "The Magnificent". He was fun before but he truly was the greatest bro this chapter. Alt timeline is a good wrap-up. I hope Suki&Co return though managing charater bloat is an issue. Need excuses to send people away on long missions or something. :V

costochondritis

kind of sad that Yue "died" before being more fleshed out...

BronRevo

Get well soon Infonticus! PLENTY will be annoyed if you kill off the Kiyoshi Warriors. Why not have them have a sort of rivalry with the Ty Lee sisters?

Daddy Ivan

Gonna be honest, would have been greatly annoyed if you killed off the K Warriors. Especially if it was because of Kyoshis intervention. Considering all the shit that she did, I don’t see why she’s getting mad at the girls. Hopefully you write in some scene where Khan gets his hands on the lesbian and beats her silly for daring to hurt his girls. I get that it’ll be hard to write the Ty sisters as well as the K Warriors but if you can pull it off, their interactions would be fucking great. I love all the characters you have around Khan and I think you’ll do a great job of incorporating the sisters as well if you put in the effort. Sure, it will ramp up the amount of words but i think it would be worth it

Uzu

Why not suki and the ty sisters? He is a conqueror after all. Also get well soon man.

Nate

Get well soon.

Tristan Taylor

Glad you're doing okay.

PegasusJake

When you have the ice cold redbull at 4am that’s definitely how it tasted. He ascended!

Spirit Stones

Please give us updates on your status, I’ve been waiting anxiously for any update

K

This was a fantastic end to Book 1! Kudos to you for such a gripping finale to the water tribe arc! (On a side note: BRING BACK SUKI!)

Dirk Gent Lee

Whoa. This is like seeing your teacher at the grocery store. Don’t you live on discord?

Dirk Gent Lee

Plus he got to drink the Red Bull

RiZan

Welcome back Sir! *salutes* Also I very much like Suki's perverted shenanigans to come back so where is this vote taking place?

GentlemanMad

Im for keeping the girls alive. Suki as been a great offset that keeps this from getting to grim with how brutal Khan gets.

Freewat

W chapter, but can you please not kill off the main cast🙏🏾

Yoshi Shoji

I like zhao now after reading this.👍

AKi1red

Holy s$&t this was peak. Bruh just wow

Jose Ricardo Passos

Shieeeeet that (possible) ending was so goooooood. Im glad you decided to drop so many chapters at once I spent all day reading those, thanks a lot for writing. Loved every minute of reading this, you made my day. I hope you recover friend, you are my favorite fic author and the world would be lesser without your writing in it. Have a great day, thanks for writing.

Sksk4128

You turned Zhoa the most textbook evil middle management character into a Bro. I tip my hat to you

PegasusJake

Holy shit bro I’m here nearly tearing up over zhao of all people! It’s the last stand I think we all want in life… its all the more sweet when it’s to defend someone we care for.

David Green

I had feared that you were tired of the story and this chapter was going to be a bad end, but I liked it

ExodiaTheForbiddenOne

I hope khan writes a amazing book about zhao dude deserves it

Dark Wolf Shiro

Man, you’ve been busy

A Bellator

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