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Guts and Glory 2 retcon notice: Chapter 29 onward rework
🕑 Added 2021-07-18 22:55:48 +0000 UTCFound a gaping plot-hole in some of the earlier chapters that I have to go back and fix. Starting at Chapter 29, there are going to be some changes. I suggest re-reading it but here's the short version if you don't got the time.
Spoilers ahead if you haven't read it yet.
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- In the original, the need for a guest ID is known by Conor and other vault dwellers. In the new version, it's implied that Jasmine is making all that up because no one mentions guest IDs except her.
- In the original version they don't even look for Zoey. Gonna fix that.
- Jasmine's motivations for not eating Gwen are changed. She's much closer to entrapping Gwen the same way she did Kastor, but instead she is told about Theo and promises to help find Kastor in exchange for introducing Theo to her.
- Cut the scene of Juniper with doctor Andrew as the whole scene was extremely forced and really fit terribly into the story. She just gets some medicine off-screen instead.
