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Chapter 40 is almost done...

🕑 Added 2023-09-16 02:50:49 +0000 UTC

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Kenneth McMullen

i agree with marcus, i personally only have a investment in zuzen and violet getting gurgled by the new girl, meanwhile the kids feel like they cant go two feet without getting into a close call as silly as that is but yeah i liked both versions of the story so far and if you need more time to figure out where the story is going then take that time.

Marcus Thompson

Take all the time you need! I’ll look forward to none the less. You have quite a few characters between the main group, violet and zuzen, Diana, and the vault people so I understand how that would be a lot too manage. If writing so many characters is a challenge then maybe a few of them could get gurgled if it will make it easier for you. So far we’ve had 1 casualty and lot of close calls. Regardless of what you decide I’ll still be a fan of the story.


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