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Chapter 146

🕑 Added 2023-08-08 03:50:48 +0000 UTC

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Chris

It is a hilarious change. I can't wait for Song Yuelin to one day here about an honor given to him by the empire for his service. Maybe even receiving special treatment at checkpoints that he has no explanation for. :D

The Lusty Bartender

Minor grammar issue in the sentence where Dragon is toned down. Otherwise great job.

Plato

I wonder if they really don't care to search or if the Dragon King or his subordinates have flexed their influence.

Baconwargod

I like the change. I also like you showing how messy rebellions are because it turns out when you get a bunch of people that believe in liberating themselves enough to die for it things turn into a clusterfuck. Turns out those same people aren’t too good at taking orders they don’t like either. Very fun and well done.

Pluto

I like it if it connecting back to Lan Fen isn’t going to be a plot point. I’ve been assuming that him giving that name to Captain Pan, who is from the Palace School, was going to get back to her at some point at point her back in his direction somehow


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