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TO&FQ: Book 3: Chapter 6 (RAW)

🕑 Added 2025-07-07 05:11:48 +0000 UTC

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Mesa

hope you enjoy the rest. you should feel that something is not quite right.

darkmuch

I’m finding it really hard to get invested in the current events. I’m really confused on how much time elapsed with her amnesia. Her POV chapters made it feel like months, but the rest of the world seems like it was 1 or 2 weeks at most. Then her just leaving the dragon corpse and ancient tech for anyone else to find seems strange. An extremely unnecessary risk. Plus I assume Cornelia could just point the way to the corpse as she has been an amazing tracker previously, and was inside the dragon when it landed. Everything right now just feels very disconnected from the previous tension. Oh well. I’m still catching up.


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