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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Chapter 35 (RAW)

🕑 Added 2025-05-01 03:14:13 +0000 UTC

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Mesa

1. is most defo a mistake [fixed now on the google version which ill send to editor] 2. is inversion!

Pete

edit suggestions: 1) Then men had bulging satchels that clinked with potions, Zajasite lantern-stones, and rope—every contingency accounted for. [Then >> The] 2) [steel calm over quaking shoulder. >> calm steel over quaking shoulder] - kinda feels like i'm getting hyper-vigilant here, but your prose is so polished that it's hard not to notice the occasional rough spot.

Mesa

Here if you really want to know early: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/89361/gilgamesh-grimdark-litrpg/chapter/2015972/book-4-in-the-light-of-the-silvered-moon

Golden Helios

I'm very curious to see what is Desdemona power/skills. Another strong ally can't hurt against Miss False Saintess.


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