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TO&FQ: Book 2 - Chapter 41 (RAW)

🕑 Added 2025-05-18 10:33:33 +0000 UTC

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Mesa

thank you! added changes to the file!

Pete

Edit suggestion: 1) She slid the sword home into its black-lacquer scabbard and offered it horizontally to the boy. [delete S's redundant declaration] The boy accepted it with both hands, reverence shining in his eyes. Even Seraphina could not awaken the magics that slept within the blade; it would resonate only with its destined wielder. For [her] it would be nothing more than a sharp lump of metal. “My gift to you,” Seraphina said. “Proof that I value your efforts and believe in your future. You’ll do this for me, won’t you, Ibn?” 2) the waterfall whose roar[ing curtain] concealed an entrance to a crystal grotto. 3) A civil war loomed like thunder [clouds] on the horizon

Hussar L

Sera is sowing the seeds of anticipated schism in the church now, by using newspapers to spread the image of corrupt clergy of the church, little by little.


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