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Obby & Loona [Script Draft]
🕑 Added 2020-08-02 22:33:42 +0000 UTCBelow is the first draft of a script! It's a commission for Flayne over on Furaffinity, involving AV, domination and other themes.
Given the work, planning and time which went into writing it, it's only fair to share this with you folks! Especially since life got in the way of the project I really wanted to get done tonight, so that's getting pushed back a day, much to my frustration.
Luckily, thus far while writing, it hasn't triggered any warnings, so it seems this has escaped the super-judgement of Patreon's watchful eye.
Sufficed to say, even if implied otherwise, any activity which is NSFW is consensual and fun for all parties involved during the below story. Any characters engaged in NSFW activities are also explicitly above the age of 18. This is written for fun, humour and titillation purposes, and is behind a paywall and 18+ warning, and I have done everything in my power to keep this away from inappropriate audiences.
With that series of disclaimers out of the way, here's the story:
Panel 1
Sharpe and Flayne both are stood, terrified as a large and busty Obstagoon hovers her paw over the two, ready to crush.
Loona, who is considerably shorter than her Pokemon, stands at a distance fiddling with her phone, her face a picture of disinterest.
Loona: Alright, that’s the contract nearly done. Just stomp the marks and we can get our moolah for whacking these guys.
Go on, Obby. Use... idunno, “stomp attack” or something, fuck it, I don’t care -- I’m sure it’ll be super-effective.
Flayne: Marks!? What the fuck, who would-h-hey, don't stomp!
Panel 2: Obby reaches down and picks up the pair of tiny duo, each in a different hand. She has a naughty expression on her face.
In the background, Luna looks up from her phone, looking surprised and annoyed. Her eyes are wide, pupils small and one raised eyebrow, with the other downward-turned.
Loona: Wait, woah, watchya doing there? I said stomp! STOMP!! No, don’t pick ‘em up, you don’t know where they’ve been --
Panel 3
Obby stuffs Sharpe into her cleavage, squeezing her boobs together. Behind her, Loona is screaming-mad, her face red. Possibly with three cartoonish sweat-droplets coming off her face. Flayne is held in Obby’s other hand, looking somewhat flustered and nervous
Loona What the -- NO! Not in there! If you’re not gonna stomp on 'em, at LEAST eat ‘em! Use bite attack... or swallow... or something like that!! Get him out of your cleavage, stupid!!
Sharpe: W-wow, this is... comfy and warm!
Loona: HEY, PERVERT! You're not supposed to be enjoying this, you stupid tiny whimp!!
Flayne: H-hey, if he goes there, where do I go?!
Panel 4 & 5
In one panel, Obstagoon walks over to Loona, a mischievous look on her face. In the second panel, she stands at full height above her “master,” casting a heavy shadow
Loona: Hey! Stop, stupid!
Panel 6
Obby turns around, her rump now hovering over Loona, whose face has gone from nervous, to worried.
Loona: Wuh-what’re you doing?
Panel 7
Obby sits down on top of Loona, pinning the hell-hound between her round cheeks. Loona struggles impotently, but is utterly stuck.
Loona: What the -- GAHH!! You’re so weird! And what’re you doing to him now
You’re not gonna put him... in THERE are you?!!
Panel 8-10
Top-down view of Loona stuck under Obby’s butt. First panel shows her struggles, second shows her staring right at Obby’s butt quizzically, third wide-eyed and in shock at what her Pokemon is doing to the tiny.
The three panels show the progression of Obstagoon first holding Flayne in front of her rump, the second inserting his feet, and the third with him swallowed up to his torso, her finger merely pushing him inside.
Panel 11:
Loona’s head flumps back, her eyes closed, clearly looking dejected. Still pinned beneath the Pokemon she thought she could control, she surrenders to its dominance, for now, laying back waiting for Obstagoon to unpin her.
Loona: Guh... I give up. Fine, keep ‘em, use ‘em as toys, see if I care. Just keep ‘em out of sight, long as nobody EVER finds out what happened here, we can just say we stomped these two out of existence and still get paid.
I hate my afterlife...
-END-
-Story is subject to change between this and the final comic, as per commissioner's request. However, this is going to be the working script.
