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Chapter 30: Theodore’s Council of Shadows

🕑 Added 2024-11-07 16:00:17 +0000 UTC
Chapter 30: Theodore’s Council of Shadows

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RENAISSANSE SI

Thanks so much for reading! I'm thrilled you're enjoying the story! 😊 New chapters come out regularly on Mondays and Thursdays, and I sometimes add bonus chapters on Fridays when I can. Stay tuned—plenty more to come!

Skruffy

This could be the case.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Really really love this and can't wait for the next chapter what is the schedule again? :)

Gopard

I'm fairly sure he didn't send assassins though... More like his "advisors" did while they press him more and more into a direction directly benefiting all actions of the Ottomans in Morea... They also happen to be super opposed to the Unification which is the one clear path Byzantium has to get allies the Ottomans CANNOT fuck with. In my mind its confirmed at least one priest and the direct advisor are Ottoman bought agents! The Noble and other priest may be as well or just stupid brainwashed "conservative zealots" like Theodore is turning out more and more to be.

Gopard

He has 3 close advisors who I assume to be bought of by the ottomans at this point they likely also organized the assassination attempt without telling Theodore! He is faithfull perfect for traitor priests to manipulate against the other Despots!

Gopard

i'm fairly certain it wasn't Theodore who ordered the assassination... Rather that noble, the advisor and likely those to priests as well are bought by the Ottomans. The way he talked this chapter now way wouldn't they at least MENTION the "failed attempt on Constantines life" once!!!

Gabriel Melnik

Can't they just put a bullet on Theodore's head and be done with it? Some flintlock pistols smuggled in his city or in his countryside while waiting for him and BAM, DEAD GUY.

RENAISSANSE SI

Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m thrilled to hear you’re hooked and invested in the clash brewing between the brothers. It’s only going to get more intense!

Empty Crate

Just binged this entire work and words can not describe how quickly I became obsessed cant wait for future chapters and the inevitable clash between the two brothers!

RENAISSANSE SI

@Bruhdude @Skruffy I totally get the frustration with Theodore. He's definitely a character who's stirring up some strong emotions! I wanted to create a complex antagonist, someone who's not just a villain but a person shaped by his experiences, insecurities, and fears. Historically, Theodore did have aspirations to become a monk, which speaks to his deep religious convictions. He wasn't favored by his mother, Helena Dragas, who often showed more support for his brothers, Constantine and John VIII. This lack of approval, along with having to share the Morea with his siblings, really fueled his feelings of resentment and inadequacy. These factors play a big role in his actions throughout the story. Theodore feels overshadowed by Constantine's successes and is threatened by his innovations and popularity. His fear of change and desperate need to preserve tradition push him to extreme measures—even to the point of plotting against his own brother. He sees himself as the protector of their faith and way of life, which in his mind justifies his actions, no matter how hypocritical they may seem. As for why Constantine hasn't publicly accused Theodore of kinslaying or exposed his treachery, that's a great point! Constantine is navigating a very delicate political situation. Openly accusing his brother could lead to civil unrest or weaken their position against external threats like the Ottomans. He's trying to focus on strengthening and may believe that internal conflict would only serve their enemies. But who knows? This tension might come to a head in future chapters! I'm thrilled that the story has you invested, whether it's rooting for Constantine or wanting to throw something at Theodore. Your reactions mean the characters are resonating, which is the best feedback an author can get. There's a lot more to come, and I hope you'll continue to follow along as the story unfolds. Keep the comments coming—they really do inspire me!

Bruhdude

I genuinely think Theodore is mentally disabled, why use the money to help the ottos instead of rebuilding the hexamillion wall, why are they calling it foreign inventions when it is clear Constantine invented it. Constantly blaming Constantine for sowing discord when they are the ones who agitate against everything he does. You have truly made me hate Theodore author, good job writing him.

Skruffy

Theodore is so hypocritical, now he starts to question his conviction/conscience when Constantine starts to tip the scale. This mf sent assassins to kill his brother, that is kinslaying in all matters. Can’t Constantine just accuse/slander Theodore of kinslaying. It would weaken Theodore and his ilks reputation.


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