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Chapter 37: The Forge of Command

🕑 Added 2024-12-02 14:01:24 +0000 UTC
Chapter 37: The Forge of Command

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Ben Robbins

A ring bayonet would be a good idea, to make the musketeers more versatile, along with a bayonet drill (stabbing the person in front of the solder next to you). I don't know how much more accurate a longer barrel will be. Muskets tended to be awfully inaccurate (thus the large formations of musketeers). Only the introduction of rifling really fixed that. One note regarding the use of cannons is they were presently placed in the middle for grapeshot, as you've done, but also on the flanks to fire solid shot at an angle into enemy formations.

RENAISSANSE SI

Hey, thanks for pointing out the distinction about Niketas—you’re absolutely right, he's a refugee, not a defector. I'll make sure to edit that! Regarding the cannons versus muskets, that's actually what Constantine thinks in the story. The protagonist won't always make the best choices all the time; his decisions are influenced by his own experiences and limitations. It's part of his journey. As for the muskets, yep, they're some proto-muskets that are ahead of their era. Constantine's basic knowledge of how muskets work helps a lot in making them, but progress is slow—it took them two years of tests, etc. Even with just a general understanding, knowing that such weapons are possible allows him to spark creativity and guide the craftsmen toward innovation.

RENAISSANSE SI

Thanks for the comment! I’m glad you’re enjoying Marcus’s POV. You hit the nail on the head—seeing things from his perspective really grounds the story in what’s actually realistic for Constantine to achieve. It’s easy to map out the “perfect” plan as a reader, but you’re right, without the support of the people, even the best ideas can fall apart. Leaders might have vision, but it’s the everyday folks who carry it forward (or not!).

RENAISSANSE SI

Thanks so much, I’m really glad you’re enjoying Marcus’s perspective! And yes, there will absolutely be a POV from Thomas down the line. He’s such an interesting character with his own ambitions and challenges, so I’m excited to dive into his story.

Gabriel Melnik

Niketas isnt a defector, he is a refugee. A defector is someone who worked for a group but then joined another in order to fight his original group, but he never was an Ottoman gunsmith, he was a Greek gunsmith working for a fallen country. Edit: About the cannons, it isn't an absolute truth the statement about muskets being more versatile than cannons, given small caliber grapeshot was used to great effect by the Joseon army against the Jurchen, only for them to be stomped via proxy war against ming funded bannermen. Anyways, taking into account that with their technology, they could be pumping out cannons at the same rate muskets are done (Bronze casting was a much more mature metallurgy than ironmaking) then it wouldn't be a bad idea to focus on canons instead. Edit: Here is a link to the small cannon I'm talking about, it basically works like a high caliber shotgun: https://youtu.be/kNKX7mcJJEU?si=Szp-DF6ckrJjtH49 Keep in mind that the idea behind those little firecrackers isn't to destroy a cavalry charge, but to stop the charging horsemans in their tracks, exposing them to either arrowfire, gunfire or just spearmans. Second edit: Hotdamn it was a flintlock, that's like almost 200 years of weapon development speedran, what's next a Minie rifle? How he even made the smoothbore smooth is a mystery unto itself lol. Third edit: Do we have some numbers on how the flintlock performs?

Hugo23

I'm digging the Marcus perspective, out of a combination of desire to see it and curiosity, is there one planned for Thomas?

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! I like the new POV by Marcus, helps give a perspective not only on how others see the changes but also what is actually "realistic" for Constantine to do. It's always simple to think as a reader with pseudo omnipotent information: Well thats obviously what they should do now, then this and make a sacrifice here which will certainly pay off in x amount of time. But at the end of the day it really depends also on the common people unless they support their Leaders any well crafted and theoretically "good plans" simply fail.

russell marsh

The light has dimmed but not yet out, it continues to endure and with leaders like Constantine and people like Marcus the light of Rome shall burn more brightly then every before

RENAISSANSE SI

I wanted to give you a glimpse into the world through Marcus’s eyes—a soldier on the ground whose perspective contrasts with Constantine lofty position. Marcus represents the ordinary people who are often overlooked. Through him, I hope to show how Constantine’s leadership and innovations ripple through the ranks, inspiring hope and determination in those who follow him.


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