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Book II/Chapter 13: The Crusade Begins

🕑 Added 2025-05-31 11:30:01 +0000 UTC
Book II/Chapter 13: The Crusade Begins

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RENAISSANSE SI

The echoes of old battles still have something to say!

Wen L.

Great war council meeting with a lot of potential outcomes and allusions. Love that you pointed to Thermopylae when describing good defensive ground. Make me think of 300 spartan warriors :)

RENAISSANSE SI

That’s exactly the tightrope Constantine’s walking, he’s offering everyone their dream prize, but keeping all those ambitions from tearing the whole thing apart? That’s the real battle. And yeah, nothing steels an army like knowing their leaders see them.

RENAISSANSE SI

Thank you!

Hugo23

Excellent chapter! These guys needed to hear their doubts and fears aloud, when the blood hits the floor they know that their leaders have an answer. That's what makes them hold firm, it what lets an army stay together through defeat or delays. They know that their trust is rewarded because their leaders made sure that every one of their fears were openly and honestly assessed. Thessaloniki... a prize for Venice, a holy cause for the Pope that lets his prestige dominate in Italy, a chance to expand his influence and prestige for Duke Phillip. A much needed coin purse to dangle for Sigismund to his restive nobles and army. Above them all? The person who called them the original owners of it and the deft diplomatic hand that dangled faith, gold, steel and prestige that drew them in. Funnily enough each of them could get exactly what they wanted... if they let Constantine have control, but can he manage the ego's?

Elaine

good chappie


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