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Book II / Chapter 22: The Wager of Speed

🕑 Added 2025-07-01 00:24:13 +0000 UTC
Book II / Chapter 22: The Wager of Speed

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Pearl of the Orient

salted meet. Meat

pls don't ban me

i'm curious. wouldn't Fruzhin be more useful if sent in the bulgarian innerland to stir trouble? something like " heya fellas, it's me, ya tsar. wanna make trouble, and make it double on the ottomans while the crusaders press on?" also if i'm not mistaken around Lovech is still active the bulgarian resistance

RENAISSANSE SI

Exactly, risky but sharp, and everyone knows the window for unity is narrow. Love that you caught the contrast between Sigismund and Constantine too; one rules with weight, the other still has to earn every inch. As for Murad… yeah, he’s pulling back, but not aimlessly. We’ll see what cards he’s holding pretty soon.

RENAISSANSE SI

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!

RENAISSANSE SI

That's a bold strategy! We'll see how it plays out as the story moves forward. 18th century sounds great!

RENAISSANSE SI

Murad definitely has some plans in motion! We'll see more of what he's up to in the next chapters!

RENAISSANSE SI

You can feel it, right? The tension’s just about to snap!

RENAISSANSE SI

You're right, the big questions are stacking up fast! We’ll be seeing more of Murad’s actions pretty soon, and let’s just say he hasn’t been idle.

RENAISSANSE SI

Glad you’re enjoying the story! A lot depends on how fast the crusade can build momentum before the situation tightens. And good catch on the date, it’s 1434, not 1433. Fixed now!

RENAISSANSE SI

Totally, classic Ottoman move, especially when things got tight. They’d lean hard into Fabian tactics to buy time or bleed invaders out. It wasn’t just smart; it was standard play when the pressure was on.

RENAISSANSE SI

Thank you! We're right on the edge now, between hope and danger. Next chapters will hit even harder

visoled

good chapter, you can really feel the tension creeping in.

Max Müller

Well they ARE running a fabian strategy

bbread

Hey I just binged your story last week, really enjoyed it. The crusade's gonna be in a bad spot if constantine cant capture larissa quick enough, b/c if they have to go around it both armies are gonna be surrounded by ottoman strongholds for miles with their only chance of resupply being predicated on capturing the very well fortified city of thessaloniki. If it comes to that and they dont get lucky within the first couple weeks and take the city, murad can just wait until theyre exhausted to releive the city and stand a good chance of wiping them out. Unless there's another lightly defenended port between larissa and thessaloniki I dont know about, or the ottomans haven't been able to adequately repair the walls since they took the city. Also I think that date's wrong at the start of the chapter

Jan Mantsch

With every chapter the plot thickens, where is the Ottoman Army who will they attack first. What lessons did they learn from their past encounters with the Byzantine army, have reforms been made? What is Murad's overall plan? A chapter from his point of view becomes more desirable with every word read.

russell marsh

I feel the hammer is about to fall

Paxmorgana

If we are seeing Murad pull these tactics from both sides, he's got to be gathering nearly all his forces in Thessaloniki, hoping to force a fight on favorable land for him. That or he's just decided to give them the land but to make them inherit a famine, to spread their armies thin and make for easier conquering next year. The question remains how he's getting all of the goods out of Thessaloniki if that's his plan - by boat? Has Constantine's victory at Domokos and reformed military inspired Murad to create the Barbary Pirate states early?

Gavriil Kourouklis

they better blitz Thessaly quickly and link siege thessaloniki and take Epirus and all of greece to the bosphrous in the treaty and i hope the story goes into the 1500-1700 and etc

Hugo23

Pushing that far without securing the strongholds? Risky but calculated for sure, along with the clear professionalism shown they know united is the best chance of victory, much like Constantine does. The contrast is interesting, people bow to Sigismund and argue that action is needed to Constantine, the difference in age and experience I suppose. It seems Murad is pulling back on both fronts which begs the question... what's his plan?

Elaine

good chappie


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