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Book II / Chapter 34: The Weight of the Ledger
🕑 Added 2025-08-12 17:32:34 +0000 UTCBefore the sun sorted color from smoke, the camp woke in low voices. Firelines hissed back to life; surgeons unwrapped and wrapped again; harness rang once and went still. Dew strung itself along pike‑heads like thin glass. Under the tall poplar tree where the council had sat, the awning sagged, and the words agreed at midnight hardened into orders: count at first light, in sight of all.
Runners went tent to tent. Teams nosed their wagons from the lines, oxen leaning until leather sang. They drew the tallying to the field’s far edge where the ground was least full of men. Ropes ran from hub to tent‑peg; a circle was staked. A chalked board leaned on a barrel swollen with damp; its hoops creaked as if still dreaming.
George stepped into the middle as if he were the stake the whole ring had been tied to. His ledger’s corners were dark from thumb and weather. Men brought what they had found and what they had tried to keep; the circle held them all.
The Burgundians did not like the circle.
A sergeant with rain‑pale eyes planted his boots and said in his kitchen French that he’d never seen spoils treated like tithes. Men behind him—good steel, tired faces—watched the piles of armor and coin the way dogs watch a butcher’s hands. The word Roman passed along their line with the slow scrape of a grindstone.
George didn’t look up. He tapped the board with his nail. “Arms and armor to the center,” he said. “Counted in sight of all. Anything else will be counted twice.”
The sergeant’s mouth opened for a reply and closed again because Constantine was already there, hair damp with the morning that had come out of the grass. He didn’t need to raise his voice.
“We said we’d count at dawn,” he told them. “We do it where all can see.” His thumb found the heavy shape in his pouch, Murad’s bent ring, and he let the weight remind him what victory could turn into if untended.
“Jean,” he said.
De Croÿ pushed through with his helmet under his arm and a grin that never reached his eyes when coin was at issue. “My Duke’s men keep tidy books,” he said, quick as bright iron. “Two of ours at your board, George. They watch the count, not the pile.”
“And two from Hunyadi,” Constantine added, “and two from Durad. Shares as sworn. We don’t forget whose spears held our flanks while we made our noise.”
Two of Hunyadi’s men with plaited moustaches took their places, grave as judges. A Serbian in sheepskin scratched tallies in a script that made letters look like fencing. The Burgundian sergeant measured the scene, spat to the side, and nodded. “Two. Each.” The word each bled off some heat. Men behind him loosened their shoulders and lifted what they had tucked into sleeves into the open.
The line moved. Armor first, as arranged.
Mail shirts came off in a glittering rain: links tight as grain heads, some new and some fretted where sweat eats iron. Lamellar cuirasses bumped down, their laces clotted with mud the color of old blood. Helmets. Round shields with their faces painted in eyes and suns and wolves. Coils of bowstring. Bows stacked like ribs. Sabers that had sung and would sing again if a hand let them. Each piece set on the central cloth and named, chalk marks cutting the air into sense.
George’s voice was flat, and men leaned in because numbers mattered.
“Mail, about two thousand. Lamellar, a thousand sound, three hundred broken. Helmets, more than that. Sabers, too many. Bows fewer, the wagons burned.”
He lifted a cloth and the coin showed itself, dim as fish in a deep well. “Gold and silver by the sack, altun, ducats, akçe, reckoned near ninety thousand ducats by Venetian weight, by our scales.” He did not smile. Numbers of that size made a different kind of hunger.
“Food?” Constantine asked.
“Barley, biscuit, dried meat, two weeks at best.” He flipped a page, dirt from his nail smudging the margin.
“Powder: most casks ruined, a few still sound. Enough to frighten a town, not much more. We can regrain it in the sun.”
He jerked his chin toward the canvas humps. “Fifteen bombards, found idle, mouths stuffed with rags. Dead weight on the march.”
Constantine took that in with a slow breath. “We haul them forward with the train,” he said. “Set them short of the walls on the Thessaloniki road. If the gates open, we melt them there; If not, let them wait.”
Jean made a small appreciative noise in his throat, like a man tasting an honest stew after weeks of salt meat. “Bronze pays a second time,” he said. “If you are patient.”
“Make it so,” Constantine said to Andreas, who appeared as he always did, already listening. “The bronze will serve us better when we shape it anew.”
George shut the ledger halfway. “Distribution,” he said, and the circle tightened. “First, to the men who went bare-headed yesterday. Then the front ranks, gear that won’t fail in their hands. After that, the oath-shares.”
He didn’t wait for the argument. He cut it off by calling names. Boys stepped forward, ears red with the listening of their friends. A young recruit with a leather jerkin too thin for winter took a mail shirt; he put it on like a penitent and flinched at the weight until his back accepted it. A Serbian with a cracked kettle‑helm traded it for a proper cap of iron and couldn’t keep from grinning, which made him look twelve until you saw his hands.
“You’ll take complaints,” Jean murmured to Constantine, eyes on the pile.
“Better complaints than corpses,” Constantine said.
A runner ducked the rope and breathed into George’s ear. He tipped his chin toward the shade where a few men sat, hands wrapped in linen, more mark than fetter, their coats clean, faces closed. Their signet rings were strung on cords and wax-sealed for the ledger. One sat with the kind of stillness soldiers notice.
"Ottoman officers," George said. "Two sanjak-beys, four timariot sipahis. They yielded to Hunyadi’s men and were brought in under guard."
“The norm,” Constantine said. “Held for ransom. Feed them, water them, give them shade. Let them see our order, not our hunger. In Thessaloniki they will be bargaining chips.”
The Burgundian serjeant heard that and snorted. “If you feed wolves,” he said, “they remember your hand.”
“If we starve them,” Constantine answered, “they remember our throat.” He let that sit. The serjeant’s face worked and then settled into a thin smile that admitted, if not agreement, then the presence of a larger game.
From the bombards’ canvas the smell of old oil and damp iron lifted, thick as a thought you couldn’t swallow. Men with pry‑bars went to work, the first wheels turning, the weight revealing itself with a grunt that ran up the line like a cold.
He walked the circle once more, boots blacking with the morning’s thin mud. Men straightened without noticing they had done it. On the cloth a single akçe winked in the sun, tarnish catching light like an eye opening. He set his thumb on it, pressed, and felt the give of metal under skin, the small, particular truth of it. Then he let it lie.
By noon the field had been given back some of its names. Chaplains moved along the trenches, Greek and Latin and Slavonic, hands black with earth, lips working the same mercy in different words. Helmets were set on mounds where heads would never rise again; a splintered pike became a cross; a strip of cloak stood in for a shroud. Constantine took one spade from one trench and said nothing. The men saw it and went on.
What dead they could not claim were laid decent in a common pit, the sign of the cross traced over it and a stone rolled into place. Crows waited in a scrub oak and did not argue.
The living shouldered straps. Coin rattled in purses that had been empty yesterday; the light it made in faces was small and practical. George sealed his ledger, snapped the thong, and sent the pay‑chest under guard to the center of the column. The first wagons lurched, then found their gait. Oxen leaned into the traces until the leather sang.
Thomas’s riders ghosted out before the dust rose, counting fords and bad ground, marking where the carts would break if left to habit. Andreas set the files in order: guns, victuals, wounded, then the long tail of kit and hope, and the march pulled itself together like a man standing after prayer.
On the fourth day the wind tasted of salt. The road tipped toward the sea; scrub thinned and went wiry; gulls stitched white across the sky like careless mending. A sprung gun‑carriage creaked in a voice the men had begun to like.
Thomas came back at a hard trot with the scouts clinging his wake, mud salted up their boots. He swung down before Constantine had time to ask.
“The garrison’s gone!” he said, breath white in the morning. “Surrendered the town to the Venetians, formally; the Lion flies on the harbor fort. They say the city is ‘kept for Christendom.'”
More trickled in, details like nails picked from a barrel. Several galleys moored crosswise at the harbor mouth, oars shipped, their hulls sitting like door‑bolts on water. A tidy guard posted in the citadel, banners neat as a ledger. Clerks with clean hands installed in the customs house and granaries; a notary reading words on the steps of St. Demetrios, restitutio per ius postliminii, and a parchment in which the phrase custodia temporaria appeared like a refrain.
Thomas swore softly. “Venice steals with gloves on.”
“Venice writes what it wants first,” George said. “Then makes the world rhyme with it.”
Constantine let the news settle in him, heavy and simple as a coin. He could feel how easily a single wrong word would turn this into a quarrel.
“Then they kept the lamp lit,” he said. “We don’t quarrel with that.”
George’s stylus hovered. “They have written.”
“Then we write next,” Constantine said. “In Latin and Greek. We thank them for keeping custody, but it ends when the keeper arrives.” He looked seaward. “Let their notary read what he likes. Thessaloniki will be ours, by ink if they are prudent, by iron if they force it.”
Comments
Pearl of the Orient
Under the thorn where the council had sat, What do you mean thorn? Thornbrush, Blackthorn, wild rose, cactus? You mention thorn twice in the first half of the chapter
Elaine
good chappie
Hugo23
I agree on Venice although I don't think they will be dealt with as a monolith. The Administrators of Venice's Sato del Mar were real hit or miss on local connections to where they were ruling. Yet they were considered family postings and a way for the lesser nobility to have income, the internal unity gives them a reason to push for the whole pie rather than accepting a slice. Venice knows the income they could get from controlling Thessaloniki but I don't think they have the stomach for the money or reputation they would lose trying to hold it, especially when the Pope and Sforza are friendly enough with Constantine to not be on their side. Personal Prediction is Constantine is going to use Venice/British strategy to get the city, divide and conquer. Something like what you detailed for the Admiral and suddenly the man on the ground isn't willing to attack. The former Administrators could be granted some dock space or a stipend to act as clerks. Venice itself a deal on Tariffs or something like that, even two of the three takes the wind out of their sails and cause division. Then the Orthodox Emperor Constantine shows up with an army, siege engines and says the city is his? They would be lucky if the citizens just expelled them...
Hugo23
Oh Venice made a mistake, if Constantine danced around the issue by the time it would possibly be settled they would have an entire garrison ready to repel him. By stating in no uncertain terms that it is HIS city makes them blink, plato o plomo, silver or lead, either take some money and shut up or back your claim up. Either betray the promises to the Pope and the Crusade very publicly or deal with the army that killed a Sultan. The Admiral is smart, light occupation means he is either intelligent enough to know not to do more than a performative seizure or cautious enough to recognize this is going to come down to a negotiation (not that he knows a dead Sultan makes the negotiation a bit less even). He would be committing reputational suicide to oppose Constantine once word of Murad's death spreads. Really clever of George and Constantine to do the loot that way, everyone gets a share after the ones with nothing get something. That could have turned ugly if the Hungarians and Serbs didn't get anything, especially with how... acquisitive the Burgundians are acting. @Empire Rewritten, Out of idle curiosity, did Constantine do anything special with a portion of the money or did it go out equally? Like setting some aside specifically for Hungary and Sigismund?
Wen L.
Glad to see everyone happy with their wealth :) Just a reference from history, 90,000 ducats is a lot of money. Around 1458, King Matthias Corvinus of Hungary had an annual income of 250,000 Florins, which are equal in value to Venetian Ducat, so it's approximately 1/3rd annual revenue of Hungary. The Entire Burgundian army around 40K men was about 400K per year during a single year of Hundreds Years' War, so it's about 3 months of military pay money in equivalence for Murad's army. This makes sense as Murad thought 3 months would be enough to take out Constantine. Venice is going to want a cut of the 90K for their time. I think some modern business mechanics can help Constantine out here. Negotiating terms should be second nature to a modern businessman like him. The Venetians are businessmen at their heart and each Admiral could be a potential Doge (the name of their leader, not the crypto coin or US dept). If Constantine can get a deal with the Admiral of the Venetian fleet for a lucrative trade like a print shop exclusive to Venice with 50% cut of profits to the Admiral's family, you might not need to spend any money. The business venture would tie Byzantine interests to Venice and could be pivotal to the ongoing Lombardy Wars fought by Milan against Venice. It's a good thing to establish business ties with Emperor Constantine than make an enemy of him, since he's nominally in control of the Balkans now.
pls don't ban me
well, time to contact the genoese. I'm sure they are dying for giving Venice a beat down
Anonykor
I think the Venetians know they can’t actually hold the city and are just doing it to weight the scale a little more in their favor during post-Crusade negotiations. It costs them nothing and it’s another line item for when they discuss what they really want. “We took Thessaloniki and then gave it back. See? We did something! Give us a better trade deal!”
Sir Baka
Ah, the wealth from the Ottoman Camp does not disappoint. I wonder if this was a later addition when the comment bought it up in the previous chapter, lmao. The Venetians… are really bold, huh. So far they haven’t really bled too much, from what I understand, and have basically just been snatching ports that shed their garrison due to fear of Constantine’s arrival. Hnm… I want to hope that they can be convinced to just lease, or maybe transfer the ports in a a few years time or so, instead of fall to infighting. Especially after Constantine managed to basically save the Crusade that nearly got stopped in its infancy. Surely the other leadership within the army will back Constantine up in the debacle… Anyways, thanks for the chapter!
RENAISSANSE SI
Yeap, with Halil Pasha firefighting and a rattled heir in motion, the only rational play is to pull tight around the core and stop the bleeding. Thessaloniki would just eat men they can’t spare right now.
Max Müller
Guess Constantine is not the only one which is able to play politics. Honestly this was probably the smart thing to do, since they would not be able to hold it anyways. Splinter the unity in the christian camp Now i think Constantine has the stronger hand because if he is willing to throw down it will hurt but venice will hurt more from this. After the Fourth Crusade, no one trusts them to not backstab the Byzantines and frankly the pope needs Constantine a lot more than he needs the venetians ( even if he is a venetian himself), so his Legate will side with Constantine i believe. Lastly heated shots wrecks wooden ships.
Davada
You don't play chicken with a man who has thousands of soldiers right outside the city your in
Davada
Constantine can definitely strong arm them into giving up the city in exchange for some trade privileges
Zayari
And honestly the Venetians trade empire has always been a bit unstable with them constantly adding a losing ports. Venices’ might is it’s Navy which loses effectiveness when you have cannons that can smash ships from the shoreline
Zayari
Also I just realized that the HRE will likely never come to full prominence like it did in our timeline thanks to The Emperor dying and Constantine “succeeding where the Germans failed” even if people rationally know a lot of people have been defeated by the ottomans. A lot of people would likely take this as a divine symbol of the righteousness of Orthodoxy because surely God was with them and not the HRE if so small a force can defeat the mighty Ottomans. Lol prepare for a new religious movement that will force the Catholics to take a harsher stance in fear of losing their monopoly on the faith
russell marsh
I knew this was going to happen ugh, that's it who wants lion chicken wings
Zayari
If the unification of the church doesn’t happen it will be because as usual the Venetians got too greedy. A Greek army is not going to want to “unify” with people who continually force themselves on their homeland. Especially now that they have finally started to retake it.
Sam Wouters
They would have enough to match onward for another prize, if the venetians do not take to fight , they could help supply for another few weeks march mayhaps, if they don't have to waste the powder?
