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B2 – Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2024-09-12 14:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Maou Razonica

Huh. I can't believe James was actually resolved peacefully.

Seras Streams

One of the things you said is correct and IS surprising when it happens.

Jeanean

Great, now you've got me thinking... Aelor would be my first thought, but that would be the asspull you say it isn't. Maybe the Elenthir return? But that would be weird considering they aren't supposed to be capable of interacting with reality in any way besides observing it. Besides, it would make little sense for them to go against Lyn. The Fey? Maybe an option, but it feels entirely out of character... Maybe Ghmoar ISN'T the only large continent and none of the Heroes simply ever bothered to fact check it? Besides that, I'm drawing a blank... I mean, sure there are a bunch of other options, but none feel like they would have the powerlevel necessary to be anything but a minor inconvenience for Lyn nowadays. Except maybe Misty goes entirely Bannanas? Maybe Aelor's distant cousin?

Seras Streams

The story is written and ends on October 10th as the last chapter release. There isn’t an ‘asspull’ of an enemy, per-se. but an enemy that has been hinted at through the WHOLE story and ALMOST NO ONE has picked up on it… I’m devious like that.

Jeanean

@Wargen If I were Lyn and Misty asked that of me I would absolutely refuse because thats honestly pretty messed up... It kind of feels like an almost worse form of Grooming. Rather, I really hope that Misty can come to terms with the fact that Lyn is, in fact, still Lyn. If anything, I would imagine that Misty has a better change to get together with new Lyn than she would have ever had with old Lyn. For one, I'm pretty sure the scout Core's Wanderlust DIDN'T just affect her geographical location, but also her relationship with people. It was mentioned that Lyn had a few instances where she blacked out and next thing she knew, she was in another town when she stayed in a single place for too long. Now imagine if Lyn woke up in another persons bed... As long as she had the Scout Core as her primary core, I don't think she could have had any secure relationship no matter how much she wants it. Meanwhile, I think that, if Misty put in the effort instead of moping around, she could actually convince Destroyer Lyn to at least give a relationship a try. Sure, it might take a while, maybe even a LONG while, but I think it would work out in the end. And not JUST because they both have the exact same issue of wanting to find love, but not wanting to outlive their partners.

Jeanean

Yes, thats about what I expect after this chapter. The way I originally thought it would play out is something along the line of: Book 4: Lyn builds up more while Khrelardia and Valagonia fight, ending with another Mind manipulation Ritual, giving Valagonia the victory and making them unexpectedly dangerous, unexpectedly quickly. Book 5: REALLY messy war with lots of things going pretty badly, maybe Lyn making some BAD decisions resulting in the loss of some Allies. But ultimately Lyn wins, but at a huge cost. Book 6: Ultimate unification, clean-up, and bunch of timeskips into the far future. That was what I roughly thought would happen. But with the way things stand, Book four will be just about the end. Maybe you could still write a fifth book, but it would have to be pretty heavy on politics and kingdom/world building without any of the previous carrying elements of power fantasy and combat. Unless, of course, you somehow pull another enemy out of your a**. But don't let me influence you. Write your story how you think is best and I hope to be pleasantly surprised by the result!

Wargen

So exciteeeed

Seras Streams

...I hadn't thought of that XD Misty tries something very different. It's hinted at in this chapter. "Face it, the Lyn you fell in love with in the past is gone.” You will see the payoff soon here!

Wargen

I feel very happy that James finaly realized what was happening to him and gave up his core. I wonder if the way Misty could get her own "Lyn" would be to create a Clone Body, shape it into old Lyn, and then have Lyn impress all her "Just Lyn" Memories to the body. She might still not be into Misty at first, but they will likely have forever.

Seras Streams

Book four is about 10 chapters, and each chapter is 10,000 words. Valagonia will have several tricks up their sleeve, so hopefully you will have a full book worth of war as you envision. Edit: quite literally, a full book of the war. And 1 chapters of aftermath

Jeanean

Didn't expect the situation with James to end like this. Honestly, I'm a bit conflicted... From a realistic point of view, it's obviously a great thing. But from a readers point of view, it's kinda not? Most of the future tension and drama of the story should have come from the war that could have dragged on for quite a while. But now that James joined Lyn, the war will be a more or less overwhelming loss for Valagonia. It might have been a "fair" fight between Valagonia and Khrelardia before, with Valagonia in the advantaged position due to their litteraly brainwashed zealot soldiers. But now, its hardly going to be a fight. And after that, the story will basically be over. Or, well, all that will be left is going to be politics and empire building, which will have very little tension if it is told from the position of an unrivaled ruler. Maybe its just my own misconception, but I thought this story would be considerably longer.

Seras Streams

2 chapters left in Book 3. Then…juicy 10k word chapters for Book 4.

Duke of Coffee

Brad plan has began, huh James surrender that quick..... and Misty is still plotting to get her bullied Lyn out of the Destroyer.


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