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DMA - B2 - Chapter 28 – The System’s Origin

🕑 Added 2024-11-25 15:00:09 +0000 UTC

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rcm024

I think you can easily make it work by boosting the dust collected in the previous chapter by the amount you were off by (probably x4 because of the split)

Seras Streams

Okay I did a fix. It's a sloppy one, but it's functional enough. It does require the audience to not pay AS close attention to the current creds reservoir the MC has, which feels a bit underhanded - but the other options are either (A) give him a BUNCH of creds out of nowhere, or (B) go back and re-do over 50 stat screens with fluctuating cred amounts. > Jace led the group back through The Cosmic Corridor’s pastel-blue portal and into the black space with the two devices. *I’ve got way too many creds*, he thought as he went over to the console and slid his sliverscreen into it, letting the here-and-now take over any thoughts of the future. Tapping the panel a few times, he took out most of his creds in exchange for Stardust. > *Puts me at 3,000 creds for anything I need on Earth, and 6,751 Stardust. Enough for 3 levels.* > Priam also walked up to the device after it ejected Jace’s Sliverscreen, “I haven’t used any of these creds yet.” Jace watched as the screen showed him zeroing out his creds.

Seras Streams

It is correct in B2 - Chapter 1. It is INCORRECT in B2 - Chapter 28 (here). so I need to come up with a way to fix this glaring error.

Seras Streams

Aww crap. I made a math goof. I hate math. This is why I didn't do a stat-heavy story >.< Okay I have to go back and rework some of the text.

rcm024

"20,000 creds converted into 2,000 Stardust." And this should be 200 stardust

rcm024

"Keeping in mind the conversion rate of 1 Stardust to 100 creds, he exchanged 25,000 creds for 2500 Stardust." Wouldn't this be 250 stardust?


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