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DMA - B2 - Chapter 41 - Acidic Artillery and Island Implosion

🕑 Added 2024-12-07 16:57:50 +0000 UTC

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EsZeus

GOOD idea. I will take a look, Seras! Came here for Jace, but maybe I stay here for your other story haha

Seras Streams

All good. I appreciate your candor in your statements. Give LLOTF a try - it is solely Tristan's POV (slow-burn, Progression Fantasy) and I don't plan on ANY POV swaps ever in that story. But I totally get where you're coming from. And I already did update the tags as soon as the different-perspective scenes popped in :)

EsZeus

And just so you know, as I said: I liked the world, narrative and the Jace as MC. But now I can't even read further into the chapters, because I need to force myself 😂 That's the type of reader I am. Sadly

EsZeus

But better quickly switch your tags on RR to multiple lead characters. Because there are people who WILL give the story a bad rating because they hate multiple POVs. And if you start investing your time into a story, and then it suddenly turns around and is something different, you are getting emotional and affected in a negative way 😊

EsZeus

Yeah, I can imagine. And I know that there are a lot of people out there who like multiple lead character stories! But at the same time, I am constantly reading about other people being annoyed by all the POV switches in other novels, too. It's a hard thing there :)

EsZeus

I understand. There is just too much going on currently for me. You know, when you start a story with 1 MC, then there are some people who are hooked because of this one character. If it's then slowly and/or suddenly switched to multiple characters, for some people this will just interrupt the reading flow. I am personally a huge fan of single POVs. Nothing more. If sometimes other POVs are shown, they must be directly related to the MC. Like; I love a single red line, so to speak, in a story. To follow one line of POV, charactery narrative, progression. The moment more people are introduced, it's too crowded for my taste. While I like Jace as a character, and I like the story and world building overally even without being a huge sci-fi fan, the multiple POVs kinda disrupted me constantly. I tried to focus on the story with all the POVs, but somehow it's not possible for me... :/

Seras Streams

The reason I did the multiple POV is because I wanted to round out other people's stories. Greg deals with his past, Quinn does as well - Earth wraps up their stories. Priam's is wrapped up in Book 2 towards the latter half. Dee's is going to be something important when (eventually) Jace goes after the Nebula Alliance. But once the whole 'B team' backstories are wrapped up? They can be off, doing their own thing, and be 'backup' when Jace needs them. I'm thinking, Book 3 and onward, for every 3 'full Jace' chapters, there is 1 'B-team' chapter. Still ruminating on how I want to tackle it.

Seras Streams

Understood. After Earth, it goes to A team (Jace) and B team (the rest) with Quinn's voice popping in to do support stuff. This persists through the rest of Book 2. It will be primarily centered on Jace in Book 3 with most of the sections told from his POV. I plan on having him split from the part more 'permanently / semi-permanently' and having him regain the focus while the B team does their own thing.

EsZeus

Mhmm... Don't like the Multiple lead characters. I was waaaaay more happy with the novel when it was just Jace. As one MC :) It's too many POVs for me to really enjoy the story. :/


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