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B2 – Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2024-09-25 14:00:02 +0000 UTC

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Jailed Cinder

Thanks for the chapter! Well... I was wondering how well that sabotage plan was going to work out... On the plus side, the cannons are still operational for Lyn's side to use...? That said, I feel kind of bad for Lionel and his mercenaries. Sure, their only real loyalty was to money. Sure, Lionel was only a minor character that was only on-screen or what have you a few times. But, at the same time, not only was he on Lyn's side, but also... Lyn just turning the entirety of the Dragon's Maw into a non-conductive metal that could endure both cannon fire and Kory's best efforts without issue kind of... invalidated the whole sabotage plan that resulted in Lionel's death. Although... I suppose the implication is supposed to be that Lyn's been too busy and/or mana-drained to do that until this chapter. Or... maybe Lyn hadn't done that until this chapter because she didn't want the Dragon's Maw to come off as unassailable so as draw some Cecily's forces, and thus trick Cecily into thinking that Lyn will be preoccupied while the main Valagonian army engages the Khrelardian army...? Maybe...? (... I might be overthinking this...) As for Vinic... Well, I'm glad he's finally dead, for sure. I will say though that, if this was a different kind of story, specifically one where the main character wasn't quite so dominatingly overpowered, I think I might've preferred for him to be a more long-lasting and more developed side antagonist. Kind of like... Joffrey Baratheon or Ramsay Bolton from Game of Thrones, I guess, but less prominent to the plot. Basically, the kind of villain that most everyone, including those they may work for, hate, or at least dislike, but they survive for a good long while because they're almost always the lesser threat/problem and they always prioritize their own survival, even if that means sacrificing those under them and/or betraying those they work for. (I recognize what I've described is pretty different from the kind of character Vinic was, but... it feels like he could've been used for more, narratively speaking, than just being a lesson for Lyn to not underestimate her enemies. That said, I recognize that what I've described probably wouldn't fit very well for this kind of story.) And as for Kory... Honestly, he was more of a threat than I was anticipating. I mean, I knew he was strong and all that, but I wasn't expecting him to just climb over the Dragon's Maw and proceed to pose a threat to the largely unprotected citizenry. Got pretty worried too when it looked like Ben was going to step up to fight him. Also, I was kind of wondering how Lyn was going to get the Shifter core. I knew she wasn't going to forcefully take it from Lawrence, obviously. But I more mean that Lawrence seemed to thoroughly enjoy being able to shapeshift, and there were apparent negative influences to his personality that would've necessitated the removal of the Shifter core. In hindsight though... I probably should've expected something like this too happen seeing how he had the backup clone prepared and all that. (Kind of makes me wonder if something similar is going to happen with Brad, in fact.)

Foxner

Kory and Vinic were good antagonists. And I didn't expect Kory to raise a good point of how Lyn sounded like Cecily.

Seras Streams

The core fully broke him in the end and consumed him. Just like it did to Skir the First.

Duke of Coffee

Damn Kory killing your former members just because.... berserkers are single minded beasts....

Kermit The Frog

🐸🐝

Seras Streams

Good catch. I’ll make sure to bring it up with the editor in October here soon.

Kermit The Frog

Small thing, at the end of part six, Lyn references having an animal core already prepped in one of Thomas's containers, but at the end of the chapter, she just grabs a random squirrel. Seems like an odd thing to reference earlier. 🐸🐿️

Seras Streams

So I take his ending was satisfying to witness?

Cosmoros Subs

Rest in piss Kory.


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