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Atago pt.4 WIP
🕑 Added 2018-01-26 19:34:59 +0000 UTCSo now I got all the sketches done and going to try finish this Atago x Takao pack in the upcoming week~(*•̀ᴗ•́*)و ̑̑
As you can see the 4th drawing’s variations is quite insane XDDD had tons of fun drawing her prolɐpse getting destroy~~(ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ
Hope you guys like this~(≧∇≦)/
̶A̶l̶s̶o̶ ̶w̶a̶s̶ ̶w̶o̶n̶d̶e̶r̶i̶n̶g̶,̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶r̶e̶ ̶a̶n̶y̶o̶n̶e̶ ̶h̶e̶r̶e̶ ̶w̶h̶o̶ ̶w̶i̶l̶l̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶h̶e̶l̶p̶ ̶m̶e̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶i̶t̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶w̶r̶i̶t̶i̶n̶g̶?̶ ̶F̶o̶r̶ ̶m̶y̶ ̶p̶i̶c̶t̶u̶r̶e̶ ̶p̶a̶c̶k̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶r̶e̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶u̶s̶u̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶a̶c̶k̶g̶r̶o̶u̶n̶d̶ ̶s̶t̶o̶r̶y̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶g̶o̶ ̶w̶i̶t̶h̶ ̶i̶t̶,̶ ̶b̶u̶t̶ ̶r̶e̶a̶s̶o̶n̶ ̶w̶h̶y̶ ̶I̶ ̶h̶a̶v̶e̶n̶’̶t̶ ̶i̶n̶c̶l̶u̶d̶e̶ ̶a̶ ̶E̶n̶g̶l̶i̶s̶h̶ ̶v̶e̶r̶s̶i̶o̶n̶ ̶f̶o̶r̶ ̶s̶o̶ ̶l̶o̶n̶g̶,̶ ̶i̶t̶’̶s̶ ̶b̶e̶c̶a̶u̶s̶e̶ ̶I̶ ̶g̶o̶t̶ ̶c̶r̶i̶t̶i̶c̶i̶z̶e̶ ̶a̶g̶e̶s̶ ̶a̶g̶o̶ ̶s̶a̶y̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶m̶y̶ ̶w̶r̶i̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶b̶a̶d̶ ̶(̶d̶e̶s̶p̶i̶t̶e̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶f̶a̶c̶t̶ ̶I̶ ̶d̶r̶a̶w̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶w̶h̶o̶l̶e̶ ̶d̶a̶m̶m̶ ̶t̶h̶i̶n̶g̶,̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶n̶o̶t̶ ̶a̶ ̶w̶r̶i̶t̶e̶r̶…̶)̶.̶ ̶B̶u̶t̶ ̶I̶ ̶d̶o̶ ̶w̶a̶n̶t̶ ̶p̶e̶o̶p̶l̶e̶ ̶e̶s̶p̶e̶c̶i̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶g̶u̶y̶s̶ ̶c̶a̶n̶ ̶e̶n̶j̶o̶y̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶p̶a̶c̶k̶ ̶w̶i̶t̶h̶ ̶a̶ ̶l̶i̶t̶t̶l̶e̶ ̶b̶a̶c̶k̶g̶r̶o̶u̶n̶d̶ ̶s̶e̶t̶t̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶a̶s̶ ̶w̶e̶l̶l̶,̶ ̶s̶o̶ ̶I̶ ̶a̶l̶r̶e̶a̶d̶y̶ ̶w̶r̶i̶t̶t̶e̶n̶ ̶u̶p̶ ̶a̶ ̶s̶m̶a̶l̶l̶ ̶d̶o̶c̶u̶m̶e̶n̶t̶ ̶b̶u̶t̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶E̶n̶g̶l̶i̶s̶h̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶g̶r̶a̶m̶m̶a̶r̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶r̶e̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶e̶r̶r̶i̶b̶l̶e̶ ̶X̶D̶ ̶S̶O̶ ̶I̶ ̶w̶a̶s̶ ̶w̶o̶n̶d̶e̶r̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶i̶f̶ ̶a̶n̶y̶o̶n̶e̶ ̶w̶o̶u̶l̶d̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶i̶n̶t̶e̶r̶e̶s̶t̶e̶d̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶h̶e̶l̶p̶ ̶w̶i̶t̶h̶ ̶a̶ ̶b̶i̶t̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶E̶n̶g̶l̶i̶s̶h̶ ̶c̶h̶e̶c̶k̶i̶n̶g̶/̶f̶i̶x̶i̶n̶g̶,̶ ̶p̶l̶e̶a̶s̶e̶ ̶l̶e̶a̶v̶e̶ ̶a̶ ̶m̶e̶s̶s̶a̶g̶e̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶c̶o̶m̶m̶e̶n̶t̶ ̶s̶e̶c̶t̶i̶o̶n̶,̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶n̶k̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶!̶~̶ ̶m̶(̶_̶ ̶_̶)̶m̶
Comments
thanks (ノ^∇^)
Frank Leo
cool
haha don't worry~ it's fine~( ´ ▽ ` )ﾉ it was like 2 years or something ago, in one of my picture pack (I think it is the tentacle pack), someone commented "the dialogue is so awkward, how will talk like this", since then I sort of just give up writing dialogues... Now my writing is mostly just going to be settings, describing what's happening etc
Comrade King already offered help so it's fine~ thanks for help~(/^▽^)/
I am glad you like the sketches~~ hopefully I will be able to finish it in the upcoming week~ （⌒▽⌒ゞ
Takuya Sawatari
Hm, English is not my primary language either. Not sure if I would be the right candidate. I was never really bothered by the stuff you wrote before though.
Such awesome pics :D Can't wait for them to be finished! :3
Hans Lim
I guess I can help out with a little proofreading, if that’s all you need done.
ye sort of, and maybe adjust some wording error and just making it better if possible XD thank you so much for offering help, I will link you the document now~( ^ω^）
Druže
You just need it proofread, then? I'd love to help out. English is my native language, so you can rest assured that I can fix any typos, grammar, or anything that might be oddly-phrased.
